Let's Spank Etrian Odyssey Episode 2: Not Just a W
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Despite certain setbacks at the end of the previous episode, the Sirens come back together, and resume mapping the first floor. Unfortunately, one Siren isn't used to trekking through hot jungle for hours on end, and her tantrums in the Labryinth are disasters waiting to happen.
Contains F/F spankings: mother/friend of daughter, friend/friend
that was a very good read, and I am impressed at your ability to write full on stories that keep a readers interest throughout the whole thing.
but just one thing that I noticed (besides the occasional spelling mistake, frick knows I can't spell either), was that during the labyrinth there were 5 people in there, Aly, Amelia, Naomi, Gwendolyn, and Sam, but there was a mention of someone named Amanda out of nowhere, figured I'd ask if I just missed something or what.
Well, I love this series so far and really want to see more. It seems like it will be lots of fun watching them develop into a team, each of them could potentially be the spanker of the spankee the way you've set up their personalities and relationships. (and I admit my knowledge of the actual game, like knowing the clearing is a dangerous place to rest, makes this more interesting)
@johny741: Yeah, "Amanda" is supposed to be Amelia. Sorry about that. Too many frickin' A names in the world. I'm surprised I didn't catch that. I do a quick read through before posting in an effort to catch mistakes, but sometimes they slip past.
@gin: I'm glad you're enjoying it. When I got attacked by the venomflies I was like "I now know what to write for my second episode" XD. Unfortunately, a lot of future episodes are going to have to take ... liberties with actual events in the Labryinth, because things get a lot sparser event-wise from here on in, and much as I love dungeon crawlers, it's kind of hard to write halfway decent stories based on wandering down identical corridors of trees and fighting random encounters.
Another brilliant read, just completely splendid. ^_^ And yet again my love for Sam & Ali as a couple grows stronger and stronger, lol. Overall I love all the characters of the Sirens and, like I somewhat said before, I look forward to the next episode. ^^
It is quite good to finally see Gwen get a spanking but now how'll Naomi get a spanking? And who can actually spank her? XD
