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"Honey? I-I got the repair estimate today..."

Got tired of trying to fix this one. Can't quite figure out what's not working. Need coffee.


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kamitora



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Registered: September 2007
Posts: 105
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Date: Wed March 10, 2010
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Bleachdoll17
Gold Member
ZOINKS!!!!!!!

very nicely done.
#1 Wed March 10, 2010 04:00

Strictdaddy1
Ph.D. in Punishment
The anticipation is palpable . . .
#2 Wed March 10, 2010 04:38

childofpluto
Captain Wildchild
awesome color!
#3 Wed March 10, 2010 04:50

artlover
Senior Member
Ok. This one is carbonating my hormones.
#4 Wed March 10, 2010 04:54

Mushy
Artist
Maybe it's just because I'm not the best art critic, but I'm failing to see anything wrong with this that would need fixed and isn't working. This is gorgeous and sexy! The soft pinks against her skintone give this scene more of a romantic, gentle approach. Her bottom is...where do I start. Very shapely and sexy - inviting.

Yes, that's the word - this picture is very inviting. I'm happy that even though you gave up on this one and seem displeased with it, that you still chose to share it. Thank you. I really think it's gorgeous!
#5 Wed March 10, 2010 05:10

BlueSleeper
Member
What's wrong with it?!? It's wonderful.
#6 Wed March 10, 2010 05:32

cherryred
Senior Member
Great artists are always their own toughest critic, obviously. But this one looks truly masterful to me.

The detailed shadings and subtle tones and shadows, and tan lines, on her bottom are truly extraordinary and the work of an artist at the very top of his game.

Thank you,
Dave
#7 Wed March 10, 2010 05:51

Wiggle Wiggle.
#8 Wed March 10, 2010 06:21

Mina
Demonic princess
i don't see what you'r talking about either, Kami. It's really well done !

Fave !
#9 Wed March 10, 2010 10:13

Aprion
Nocturnal Dumpster Goblin
You know how it is. Artists are their own worst critics. looks perfectly fine to me. Heck if i could color like that id be over the moon.
#10 Wed March 10, 2010 11:04

raz
Senior Member
Beautiful work of art. I love your works, kamitora.
#11 Wed March 10, 2010 11:53

Nadja
Spanktastic
I must say that I prefer this one over your normal, more shiny artwork. A clear favourite.^^
#12 Wed March 10, 2010 14:16

Philotas
Probationary User
Uhm, alright, Kami, forgive me for taking liberties, I'm more of a lurker than anything else and please bear in mind that I feel, and I am, the monkey telling God its mind, here, but... since you said it didn't work for you I'll try a couple of impressions of mine.

Her upper body looks too distant from her bottom to me. Not overmuch, really, on second look, and I understand that you were looking for a dramatic perspective, possibibly to focus attention on the - ahem - important part, both visually and for emotional impact (which is why, like Strictdaddy said, anticipation is palpable) but perhaps a little less would make it work?

Or maybe, she gives me the impression that her torso is not supporting most of her weight, as it should in the position she's in, considering that her legs are not perpendicular to the surface of the bed .

How do I get this right? English isn't my mother language... she looks like she's getting into position, not like she's already there and waiting. Or perhaps like she should have something under her hips to make her bottom stick out like that.

In any case these things, in the remote chance that they're not the product of my imagination, are truly truly minor details in a pic that is, without a doubt, in both mood and execution, the epithome of the phrase "eye-candy".

The camera-eye effect for the background, which becomes unfocused as distance grows, is masterfully used, and the soft shading creates a very romantic atmosphere.

Aahahh - blushes - forgive me if I overstepped myself, the truth is that I couldn't draw something like this to save my life!

P.S. Love the cap - she prepared herself and anticipated him because she knew what she was in for anyway... a master's finishing touch
#13 Wed March 10, 2010 18:37

twig06
Artist
you r very exigeant withyourself, i found this one particulary gorgeous and the effects you use for light, shadow and color are perfect for build a troubling but sweet "before spanking atmosfear". And for the draw itself like everytime: just awsome. Thank you for share your super works with us!
#14 Wed March 10, 2010 21:06

Rak
Artist
Your definition of 'not working' seems in need of a repair estimate ^^

You never cease to amaze me, great job on the colouring, the position, depth and the general atmosphere.

I guess artists are never happy with their work anyway ^^

You really are the benchmark for the rest of the artists here, mere mortals that we are ^^'
#15 Thu March 11, 2010 00:06

Cc
Artist
Philotas has some points, but I agree that they are all more drawing errors than coloring errors. The coloring looks amazing to me. I really like the lighting effect. The coloring looks very realistic, and the lines are so thin they look non-existant. Really amazing, I really like it!! And the idea of what it's for is fun, too. Heh. Super sexy, the tan lines are an awesome detail, too. x3
#16 Thu March 11, 2010 05:09

kuroi
Junior Member
Cc, it took me 3 times looking at the picture before I noticed the tan lines. They're very subtle and they blend in with the shadows of the room.

It's a great picture, but the bottom and legs don't match the angle or twist of her spine. She looks as if she's bending sideways toward her left side. Perhaps if she rotated her buttocks to the right and brought her legs in ever so slightly (to increase the arch) she'd be in an excellent position.


With that said, it's still miles ahead of where I am now.
#17 Thu March 11, 2010 07:30

Erebus
Senior Member
You don't see her breasts, that's what's not working !

Seriously... maybe the upper and bottom halves don't quite go perfectly together, I'm not really qualified to say. What I can say is that I really love the coloring and the silvery lighting !
#18 Thu March 11, 2010 14:54

kamitora
Artist
Everyone has good points on what's "off" with this one. It was one of those times I had already scanned and started coloring before I started noticing the incongruities/problems (I was too anxious to try out the color/lighting on her rump). I was even trying to figure out how I could crop the pic to JUST her rump!
Oh well. Thanks to all for comments and criticisms (^_^)!
#19 Thu March 11, 2010 16:37

OTKUGO66
VIP Donator
A tempting target and plenty of anticipation! I'm with Cc on the coloring - it is amazing, and the focus effect, like a camera lens with a wide aperture, works well too. Not sure what the problem is because I can't "feel" it the way you do, but perhaps the scapulae, or the crease between them extending a little too low is what's bothering you.
#20 Thu March 11, 2010 18:01

rhunter42dragon
Senior Member
I'VE GOT IT!!!! I KNOW WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS PICTURE!!! The fact that it's only a drawing prevents me from grabbing that hairbrush and spanking her myself... other than that, I don't see a problem.
#21 Thu March 11, 2010 21:51

Jubal
Gold Member
If this was any more cool, it would be FROZEN! What an incredibly talented artist you are! THANKS for sharing with us! You've made my day & my week!
#23 Sat March 20, 2010 11:11

Jinchu
VIP Donator
A little unusual style, still a real masterpiece! Great!!!
#24 Tue May 25, 2010 14:31

Moralino
Probationary User
very nice
#25 Mon July 26, 2010 21:32

gokveg
Junior Member
what do you mean "fix" it? it's perfect
#26 Mon August 23, 2010 03:47

Angie
Senior Member
I'd be very interested to see how you could possibly 'improve this, it would be fun to compare them side by side. For me, this is an amazing pic that brings up instant images of domestic discipline.

Angie
#27 Fri September 24, 2010 02:20

The physics of the shadowing are very well done! Well thought-out!
#28 Wed January 5, 2011 21:15

dinocrisis
Member
Love the tan lines.
Really good picture.
#29 Wed January 5, 2011 21:24

digerman3
Junior Member
a bottom waiting for a long spanking
#30 Sat January 15, 2011 06:40

JDecurious
Banned
Well now receive!
#31 Thu February 19, 2015 07:44


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