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OMG!!!..this was absolutly brilliant!!!..I am going to go through and comment on every page to point out my thoughts and comments....I just wanted to read it strait through to get the effect! ...I was on the edge of my seat!!!..shaking with excitment as each page loaded!....you did such a great job!!...I want to prinit out the pages and put it together like a manga...and read it over and over!!! *squeals with delight*
Wow, this was an absolutely amazing comic. If it were in color it would have blown my mind. Heck, it still blows my mind. xD The expressions were priceless, both the pained ones, and the humorous ones; a wonderful mix to add humor and seriousness. Your style is really amazing to me. The way they are incomplete bodies in many of the panels would be amazingly hard for me to do, but you pull it off great, and things are still mostly in proportion and look great. The spankees thoughts really added to the whole thing. You had a very interesting but successful panel set up throughout, and it had a very manga-esque feel to it. Very good, and I don't even like M/M.
All in all your quality of work is absolutely admirable and shocking. A very wonderful comic, with a mix of everything to make a great sp comic; a feisty spankee, a dominant spanker, humor, sexiness, style, and well written, well thought out dialogue. With great before/after sequences. Again, amazing.
The only thing I would suggest improvement wise is working on the line art a little more. I'm guessing you're using a pen--you might upgrade to a more specialized inking pen or marker for darker, stronger/smoother lines. The shading you do have looks well done. Also, maybe after this improved inking is done, you might run your image through a program to clean up the stray marks and unwanted messy areas, and increase contrast so you have a crisper white and black look. Overall though, I have to still give this great piece a 10. Probably hands down the best M/M comic on the site.
Arkham-I loved coming through here and just being able to read your comments! You're hysterical and a great force behind the FMA spanking movement here at this site (if you could call it that, lol) so I am honored.
My Secret Life- You're cute : ) I am really glad I gave you something you enjoyed. And I had to put the comfort scenes in, I find it just too cold of an event if it’s a spank-and-run. (you guys I am making these terms up, lol)
Cc- Wow. Thank you. Really. That’s a nicer comment than I ever could have imagined getting. I apologize for the sloppy art. I sketched with pencil, and went over sloppily with a gel roll, scanned in, and cut&paste with MSPaint. So it’s probably the most amateur comic anyone could have made. I won’t lie, I don’t know how to work any awesome programs (like the way Arkham makes her stuff look so awesome) So I decided to run with what I can do: rough sketching. Hahhaah, unless I get an art program tutor this is probably as good as it gets. (Unfortunately….though I don’t mind some sloppy art on the side in my busy schedule.) Still! I am glad you enjoyed it! I checked out your gallery and you’re Good! You’re comments really left me with a smile. Thank you.
...I was on the edge of my seat!!!..shaking with excitment as each page loaded!....you did such a great job!!...I want to prinit out the pages and put it together like a manga...and read it over and over!!! *squeals with delight*
