Do you need me to make any more changes?

I edited and added stuff to our Role Play, and I hope you find it satisfactory. If not let me know, And I'll make whatever changes you want--you know more about role playing than I do, and your directions are helpful to me. Just let me know what you think.

OK, I'll make the necessary revisions.

As, could you edit your reply as we discussed only I write as her, but you only write that the carpet beaters make her cry.

You could say that Ariadne starts a conversation with her, and goes into long details of the beach, and then when I respond hers, you have her instantly drag her to the beach and then go from there.

OK, THAT'S how it'll be. You speak for your character, I'll speak for mine if something happens to your character that you want me to describe, I won't speak for; as you say, she'll only scream and cry as her butt's busted. Also, the bad words Arianna says--those will be handled by you, and there'll be no conversations. How do you want me to handle questions I may find it necessary for Ariadne to ask, like "Let's go to the beach!" (for example) You're a lot more experience in this than me, so I'll follow your directions. You may have advice, too.

It's fine. I'm not angry.

Like don't make her speak, but you can have her reactions. Like take this for example when you have her spanked.

'The hairbrush collided repeatedly into Arianna's bottom, making her scream and cry loudly due to the hard wooden surface'

No problem. If it's possible could you tell me the sections of the RP where I control Arianna, or if you could give me a general idea of how I control me? I'll take care of it right away. Sorry.

I'm saying that I only control Arianna's responses as she's my OC. You can only play her by permission. You're welcome to say her responds like 'making her scream and cry' as that's a likely response but not her speech.

I've made a response to our role play. I hope you don't find it too confusing, and that I have described the continuation of Arianna's unfortunate experience. Likewise, I hope you don't mind that I've spent some time with Ariadne's personality and experience. Naturally you're welcome to do the same with your OC, and of course you can make your own entries as short or as long as you want, or as you deem necessary. I think I have a reputation here as being long-winded, and yes, I agree.