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The Latin phase Dulce et decorum est pro Patria mori once rang all across the land of Nappon. But now with the coming of peace the phase has once more vanished to the forgotton tome of history along with the names of those who bore it. Its been at least three years since the cannons and rifles have fallen silent all across the land but yet in the mind of young James Waterflower Bell the battle still rages on. For in his mind he still bears the bold redden text of Dulce et Decorum est pro patria mori.
It's a very interesting idea, and excellently done Sue, the descriptions and character interactions are dynamic and move the story along well ^^ Another brilliant work
You executed the idea well, and described things in a nice manner. the focus on minor details adds a lot to the story. The only thing I think you need to work on is your grammar, but it didn't detract from getting your message across. They say a picture is worth a thousand words. That is a pretty detailed picture.
I love all the small details in the story. They really bring the characters and setting to life. This one was a bit longer than your other stories, but it was still a fun read. If only it didn't have an F/M spanking scene in it :P