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This is a My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic spanking fic.
But don't fret, this story is completely non-canon. No spoilers over here!
Summary: The Cutie Mark Crusaders pull another dangerous stunt in the middle of town. Will they be able to weasel out of trouble?
(I realise, given the website to which I am posting this story, that the above question is extremely rhetorical. )
In a nutshell:
Rainbow Dash's behaviour was pretty funny, and really delinquent-like, but Applejack's speech was not characteristic enough. I'm not really cultivated about ponies customs, but she didn't had that Texan-like kind of speech. Maybe that can be improved. However, Scootaloo and RD's relations was clever (proof that you actually did the research), but I found that RD was a little too passive, and not self-centered and arrogant like in the show. She sounded more like the lazy pegasus than the arrogant pegasus. But that's still a valid version of this character.
So, yeah, I don't really the place or the motivation to write a full review, and since I'm not a native English speaker, I don't really have the right to do so, I just wanted to comment about what I liked and what I disliked in the story. When introduced in the story, Rainbow Dash is funny, but once they start speaking about spaking, I think she becomes too passive. I was expecting to be the lecturing type rather than the deliquent type, but she was funnier that way, so it was good anyway.
WHY YOU SHOULD READ THIS STORY:
Because it's about the Cutie Mark Crusaders? The most annoying folks in the show? Because you'll be expecting a spanking in the first page? Because there's Pinkie Pie in this story? Because Appleboom and Applejack's relationship is quite amusing ("Hey, Big Macintosh?")?
@Anyonethatfar
If you're referring to phonetically-expressed dialect (e.g. "Ah" instead of "I") then I deliberately left that out because, in my experience, it tends to break the flow of the story and almost belittles her as a character. Otherwise, I'm not sure what you mean, would you care to clarify?
@@Anyonethatfar
I helped numer987 with this so I'm glad you like it. and I also agree that the Crusaders can be annoying but I still love them. not saying you don't but some people hate them for that very reason.
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you don't have to add it in but do you want to say who it was that spilled the beans on Tiara and Silver Spoon?
