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It’s the first day of spring at The Warrior’s Heritage Academy, a school for specially gifted students who inherited the magical powers of their ancestors. Talbachi Senshi, a rather unremarkable young man, hasn’t had much success or popularity in his time there, but still has high hopes for this beautiful new season. His hopes seem realized when the school Idol Minako Fujiwara appears before him one morning.
My entry for Fireball666’s spring writing contest. I was actually very excited to write this, it was good fun. A short story, 10 pages long and 7000 words. Even if it doesn't win, please enjoy!
I commend you! This story was absolutely fantastic! I loved the world that you created with this story. Even the title sounds like an anime! While your main character is a pervert, you wrote him as an underdog type, who is very vulnerable (like the detail with never being touched, ugh, it broke my heart!), so I found him quite endearing. Your inspiration from the picture played very well into your story, and in such creative ways (like the yellow bag of salt, just too cute!). I would love to know more about this world and its characters. And how you introduced the protagonist, built up the relationship between him and the popular girl, and ended it with a fight (SPOILER ALERT: that we all hoped he'd win, but didn't, and yet still succeeded!), and the ending, ah! Lovely, brilliant story telling, I must say! However, I will address one small problem. The way you wrote your story seems very much like an anime, so you do not need to add in Japanese dialogue in bits and pieces. The essence is already there. Just use the English translation, and we'll still get the same feel! That being said, congratulations on a wonderful story!
Thank you all for your wonderful and encouraging comments. I'm not a very prominent figure here at AOTK, so to have so many downloads and uplifting comments really touches me in a way I can't express enough appreciation for. You give me gumption to continue to write and hope for the best. Thank you all so very much! Thank you so much for the lifeblood you give to this wannabe author.
I love how energetic it is! ^^
