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File Name: Victor Von Schnell 2 (397.7 KB) Download
Author: Vinsanity (Uploaded by Vinsanity)
Date Added: October 11th, 2016
Downloads: 52
Grade: A
Description
After dealing with a group of rowdy soldiers, Victor has decided to target the Butt-Buster Empire. He'll spank his way from the bottom of their ranks, right up to the top. The first victim? The Vice-Captain known as the Emerald Heiress.
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Comments
Sumoka
October 13th, 2016 at 04:17 PM
I really liked this chapter.
Especially the dynamic of Ki and Victor. It's easy to lose empathy for someone that strong and Ki and Ms. Cane make him more relateable.
Also his "difficulties" in the fight make it more interesting.

Overall I really saw progress in this one in character and in the spanking scene.
But I have noticed that you don't really draw a picture about the locations and suroundings of your characters. Probably it would be easier to imagine the scene with some details, but this is just me being nitpicking.

I personally enjoy smut in these stories now and then but i think this bit didn't need it. It's no fun if they already admit defeat.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

(I'm not very familiar with the policies here, i think smut is okay because i think i read some type of it in another piece. But better be safe than sorry, and ask an Admin)
heero yuoy
October 13th, 2016 at 04:20 AM
great read keep up the good work!


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