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File Name: [X-Men] Naughty Kitty (74.4 KB) Download
Author: lonewolf86 (Uploaded by lonewolf86)
Date Added: October 5th, 2017
Downloads: 70
Grade: A+
Description
Kitty Pryde harasses Rogue throughout the day and pays the price for it. Inspiration hit me after watching X-Men the other day. Let me know what you think of the story.
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Comments
Skull612
October 6th, 2017 at 06:13 AM
This was alot of fun, something that seems to be true of all your stories thus far! Definitely liked it, and I certainly wouldn't mind more X-Men stuff by ya.
lonewolf86
October 6th, 2017 at 04:47 PM
Thank you Skull612. I try to keep my stories fun, but some may be darker. After I uploaded this story I thought of some changes and additions I wanted to make to it. More of an adult themed ending at least.
zae
October 10th, 2017 at 05:07 AM
That was cute, fun and enjoyable. Thanks for writing it.
lonewolf86
October 11th, 2017 at 02:18 AM
Thanks Zae, I appreciate your feedback and am happy that you enjoyed it. Was fun writing this one.
spanktacular
November 18th, 2017 at 02:25 AM
Cute, I really liked the idea of Kitty getting stuck mid-phase in the wall.
I've always been a big fan of Rogue, and Kitty is a pretty mischievous cutie too.
Thanks very much for sharing it was a fun and enjoyable read. One thing to think about is that description paints much more vivid picture than sound effects. It seems second nature to use things like "spank spank, or whap, smack" etc because describing a repeated action in different ways is challenging, plus who doesn't love some nice sound effects right? It adds a little more color though if you describe it. [ex the speed of the swing, the angle, the point of impact, the immediate result of the impact etc] Just something to think about. I really enjoyed the way you played out Kitty's pranks and how you maximized her resourcefulness with her phase ability. It was quite entertaining to picture! Thanks again for sharing, hope to see more!
lonewolf86
November 19th, 2017 at 04:15 AM
Thanks a bunch for your feedback Spanktacular. Kitty and Rogue make up my favorite pairing in the X-men universe so far. It makes my heart go warm and fuzzy knowing another person has enjoyed my story. Kitty's powers give her many options for mischief. I have a couple ideas for another X-men story featuring Kitty again but not sure as to when or if I will get around to writing it.

I agree with your advice and am working towards being more descriptive with each new story or chapter I write. I just submitted another chapter of my Overwatch story into the moderation queue and I think it might be my best one yet on a technical level.


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