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File Name: The Punisher From The Pool - Autumn 2009 Writing C (37.2 KB) Download
Author: iconoclast (Uploaded by iconoclast)
Date Added: November 25th, 2009
Downloads: 91
Grade: A+
Description
Here is my entry for the writing contest, presented with apologies to my favorite author. (horror, x/m)
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Comments
Emily
November 26th, 2009 at 11:21 AM
Very impressive entry! The spanking content is a bit thin, much like my own entry, but you really nailed the style of everyone's crazy New England racist.

I like how you evoke all of your chosen author's characteristic tics. The near-total lack of dialogue, the massive exposition dumps, the hysterical italics, the fixation on feared miscegenation... it's bang-on. I've read a lot of the author in question, and this is the best imitation of his style I've ever seen. Nice work!
iconoclast
November 26th, 2009 at 02:54 PM
Thanks Emily. I think the hardest part about this was finding a way to work spanking into one of his kind of stories. Something tells me I won't be the only one having that problem.
Erebus
November 28th, 2009 at 01:11 AM
For once, I didn't have any trouble figuring out who the author was ! Of course, the fact that the scenario and atmosphere you used are very close to his work helped a lot.
I also think you've done a very good job of capturing the features of the author's style (as well as the usual structure of his stories). The "retro feel" is very enjoyable. Your descriptions do a good job of creating an atmosphere.
Inserting some spanking into this kind of horror story was quite a challenge, but you've succeeded very nicely.
Cc
December 18th, 2009 at 08:24 AM
Wow IC Onoclast, this was really a fantastic entry. I think I have read Lovecraft before, but it's hard to say for certain, however the way you styled your story was very familiar. So maybe I have in the past, and just don't remember. Regardless, I thought it was brilliantly done; I think the language throughout the work was very powerful, and I felt it was very professional. ^^ Like it was reading a portion of a real novel.

The story itself was quite eerie but indeed in a unique plot and was very entertaining. I was very curious about the entire thing as it all unfolded, and I still enjoy the mystery being left glazed over the entire thing by the not fully resolved ending. You did very nice, great work!!
februaryleaf
March 21st, 2010 at 09:36 AM
This my favorite of the contest entries. Even I have to admit I never read anything by Lovecraft really.

You did well this kind of mystery horror thing, It just has the magic of wanting to read more and learn just what's going on.

Also doing quite unusual spanking in this kind of contest was a brave thing to do.


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