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File Name: Classes, lunches and Setsubun. (77.5 KB) Download
Author: MR AZ (Uploaded by MR AZ)
Date Added: May 21st, 2013
Downloads: 118
Grade: A-
Description
It was not any normal day, it was Setsubun! Spring had just arrived and it was a time to celebrate. Still some things don't always go right, not even in such a festive day.

M/ff, a bit of F/mm and the insight of two friends and how being hungry can get to you.

For Fireball666's contest.

Enjoy =).
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Comments
Nerine
May 28th, 2013 at 03:17 AM
Beautiful description, Mr AZ! I've lived in Japan, and your story really made me feel nostalgic! I love the cultural references that you made to the oni (that first spanking bit was absolutely adorable!) and temples (though if you're going to be very specific about things like that, be sure to explain, like give a city or region of Japan, or translate the Japanese phrases so that those who don't know much about Japan can be more involved in the story). Also be careful with run-on sentences! Your spanking scenario was creative, and I loved how you captured details from the picture. Good job!
MR AZ
August 13th, 2013 at 10:50 PM
Thanks for the great review Nerine nwn. I thought I was specific with the places, I did a lot of researching until I found a place with a temple that had more or less the same stairs shown in the draw xDD. But you're completely right, I should translate some more. And thanks for the tips, I'll listen to them nwn.

Thanks you for reading.


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