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File Name: Miyuki's tale of redemption (44.3 KB) Download
Author: HOOfan1 (Uploaded by HOOfan1)
Date Added: February 16th, 2019
Downloads: 58
Grade: B-
Description
A theoretical story behind the scenes depicted in Keishi Ijime by Manjiyamada
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remo1
February 18th, 2019 at 09:27 AM
I liked it, but the story is so descriptive it almost comes off as dry. Which is why I couldn't give it a B or A. I guess what I'm saying is it's super third person ominiscent narrator descriptive without much characterization actually give to the characters themselves to display. Still, it makes a good 'alternate explanation' for the punishment depicted in the pictures, and I really liked this idea.
HOOfan1
February 19th, 2019 at 02:55 AM
To tell the truth I wrote this in about 45 minutes. Basically stream of conscious writing. There were several parts that I thought were truncated, but I thought it ended up being too long anyway. This was more of an attempt to give the girl being abused some sort of control over her own destiny, than attempt at decent fiction. I thought the series of picture was too depressing without the thought that she has some control over her life and body.

This is actually the first work of fiction I have actually written in 20+ years.


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