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A nice story I wrote about a boy who has been having some... interesting dreams about getting good spanks from dragons in another land. Now, he seeks to be with them... this is his story.
This was definitely enjoyable, and different! I thought I had seen most of the premises and permutations of spank fic over the years, and it was a pleasant experience to be proven wrong. Thank you.
Very cute. I liked this story, it is cute and inventive and it made me smile. Your characters and your world are both interesting and endearing.
However, I felt as though the execution could use some work. It all smeed very rushed. There were some points where you chould have shown us something earlier but instead you just told us about it after the fact. For example, when you talk about Rlei's father being an alcoholic and about how crummy his life is, you could have shown us this earlier in the story. It would would have made his escape to the dragon world that much more exciting.