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Sumoka May 3rd, 2017 at 05:43 PM |
Another nice read, especially the "chase" was funny. I hoped that Hana would have lost her game through her absence and get a little trash talk herself for being such a bad sport Waiting for the next chapter. |
lonewolf86 May 4th, 2017 at 10:46 PM |
Glad you liked it Sumoka, it was fun writing this chapter. Hana's game is like Schrödinger's cat, you won't know its fate til we open the box The next chapter is in the works still. I wish more people would comment and let me know their thoughts though, 40 downloads to one comment is a pretty low ratio. |
Jac the Kraken May 5th, 2017 at 03:10 AM |
Aw, poor, poor, Mei! T.T I feel bad that she got spanked, mostly because Hana apparently is part of the demographic of people I hate sharing a living space with. Of course, I'd be lying if I said that I didn't enjoy or never wanted Mei spanked. :P
All that aside, I loved this chapter! It was pretty fun and very energetic! I hope Chapter 3 is made with the same kind of energy! And I hope Hana gets a little Mercy(:P) after the day she's had. |
lonewolf86 May 5th, 2017 at 11:46 PM |
Glad you loved it Jac If it wasn't for Hana's mischief, Mei would be sitting comfortably. Not sure if chapter 3 will have the same energy but we shall see. And I see what you did there |
Skull612 May 6th, 2017 at 06:08 PM |
Hmm, I don't think too many people comment here sadly, but I gotta say please don't let that discourage you! I certainly enjoyed both chapters so far, you found a really good way to write the overwatch characters into sharing a house, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. ^^ |
lonewolf86 May 7th, 2017 at 04:39 AM |
Thanks for the encouragement Skull612. I'm glad you are enjoying my writing. |
rrichmon May 9th, 2017 at 09:18 PM |
Aww poor Mei,(is bae) love the Overwatch characters and I see tons more opportunity with them. your style of writing blends quite well with it. keep it up. |
lonewolf86 May 9th, 2017 at 11:14 PM |
Thanks rrichmon I have a fair bit planned for the different girls. But if anyone feels like they have a good idea that I can work into the story they can message me or put it in https://animeotk.com/forum/showthrea...ead-29727.html |