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Pharah and Jackal are punished for a failed escape attempt. Contains M/F spanking and whipping. Please let me know what you think of the story, I love hearing what you all think.
I'll be honest, mate. The first time I read this chapter I got overwhelmed since I didn't expect Junkrat with the bullwhip and the subsequent flogging. Second time I read it, I was prepared for it and picked up on some things I missed the first time around which was great.
I like that you made it so that Jackal didn't get it as bad as Pharah, though. It was nice to see that there was still a bit of fairness from the Junkertown duo even though Rat and Hog don't have the most savory of plans for the girls.
I think the best thing about this chapter was Jackal saying that Pharah was going to have to make it up to her later because of the implications of that statement.
Hopefully there will be some sort of rescue mission for the girls. Or maybe not, we'll see~
(Something I'd like to see is that the rescue crew consists of Sombra & Widow cause Sombra found out about the bidding for them online and got Widow to help her get them out by "posing" as Talon. Just some food for thought if you haven't planned that part of the story yet~)
Thanks for your feedback Snails! What was going through your head when you were feeling overwhelmed? Pharah having to make it up to Jackal is going to be fun. I have a few ideas floating around in my head on how to get Jackal and Pharah out of their situation and I don't think you will be disappointed.
Can't really remember what was going through my head, lonewolf, but I remember that the general idea was that I never really expect whippings to be as... brutal, I guess, as they are portrayed. I've a spanking obsession, not a whipping one so I never really know what to expect, ya know?
I have a few ideas floating around in my head on how to get Jackal and Pharah out of their situation and I don't think you will be disappointed. 
