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What bothers me most in your stories is your "author's note". I mean, that's what this page is for, and in my opinion, you're kind of breaking the fourth wall with that.
The other thing I don't like, and just like the other, is my opinion (and thus not a fact), is the fact that Link, being the Hero of Time and whatever Skyward Sword added on his head, should probably not be on the receiving end. But, as I already said, that's my m/f macho persona speaking here.
(Hell, each time I play Ocarina of Time and see those female kokiris mocking Link, it's like-)
That being said, your story was quite good. Talt should've been a little more annoying, but Link and Navi's innocence was quite good. The spanking in itself was... quite good, I guess? I don't really know.
However, the end ,"he and the Princess began to talk about Gannondorf and the future of Hyrule", is just botched. Still in my opinion, you shoulda removed that sentence.
Have a B, because there's a lot of good stuff, but I'm mostly trained to see the bad stuff.