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File Name: Nerves (4.1 KB) Download
Author: Sakura (Uploaded by Sakura)
Date Added: September 30th, 2010
Downloads: 54
Grade: A+
Description
Someone suggested I tried writing. Just a page. To see how it would go. Well, here's my page.

No spanking in it, unfortunately. Just the monologue of some pre-spanking jitters of our main character.

I hope you like it. Try not to judge too harshly. It's a first try.
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Comments
Aprion
September 30th, 2010 at 09:53 PM
ohh i like it. its very... how do i put this.. it feels tense. like your really there. the detailed descriptions of the room and the things going through his mind add so much to the scene. its a shame its over so quickly ^^;; id love to read more. you have a good sense of style and pacing :3
Liko
September 30th, 2010 at 09:59 PM
Very good, Sakura! You really manage to capture the thoughts and feelings of somebody who knows he is in trouble. Very evocative description, with amount of details I can only hope to eventually emulate. Please continue writing.
Sue Bell
October 15th, 2010 at 06:23 PM
A very nice story Sakura, I love how you tapped into the feelings of the spankee. I would love to see the secound part of the spanking.


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