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Victor is a wanderer with a mission, and that mission is to paddle the bottom of any wicked woman who crosses his path. Needless to save, he loves his job.
First fic on this site, feedback would be greatly appreciated.
First of all I really like your story. Especially the setting and a spanker with super powers is great. It really feels like a fantasy story.
Some things I think could be better. Ms. Cane's appearence was more fleshed out than the appearences of the spankees. More Details about their body-types, stature and facial features for example, would make the characters more interesting. Maybe it's a choice of style but I would like to also read more details about the spankings itself. Some response of the victim, or what she feels in this moment.
I have a thing for cheeky Brats who get what they deserve so it was a pleasure to read and I hope I can read more stories from you.