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File Name: Firefly (24.9 KB) Download
Author: Fulgur (Uploaded by Fulgur)
Date Added: March 29th, 2014
Downloads: 106
Grade: A-
Description
A little encounter during the summer...
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Comments
Zekel
April 3rd, 2014 at 08:32 PM
A wonderful, warm, cute and youthful story! As someone who likes tomboys, Firefly's character hit my moe points for critical damage.
23 downloads is a shame, all the people missing out on this!
Akuma
April 11th, 2014 at 06:03 AM
Decided to change my grade from an A to an A+. You earned it :-)
xEmmalia-Chan
April 15th, 2014 at 05:03 PM
Wow, the narrator's kind of a dick. So what if she uses a flashlight? He's got no right to tease her over it, or call her names that she obviously dislikes. I suppose it's true to life, though - it's become a stereotype, it seems, that women fall for the biggest douche.

Outside of a few verb tense issues and misspellings, it's decent, though. The pacing is set up well enough, but why is everyone so excited? Nearly every line of dialogue is punctuated with an exclamation point. I liked Firefly's character, even if I greatly disliked the narrator, and the glow of a firefly comparison is certainly clever.


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