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Contains M/F spanking. Several of the Overwatch girls live together in a manor. In this chapter, Hana Song (D.Va) is punished by Jack Morrison (Soldier 76), for late rent. This is my first ever fiction. Let me know what you like AND dislike about it.
I think that it was a good read. ^_^ Good grammar, excellent execution of your concept, and of course, 76 giving D.va a spanking is always good! Great story and hopefully there'll be more chapters~
The story is really enjoyable. It's really helpful that you put the actual names of the characters at the top, this makes it much easier to read especially when someone is not really familar with overwatch. Maybe you could integrate the thoughts and feelings of 76 a little bit more, to make him more than just the "Punisher". I also really liked the exchange at the door it felt really light hearted. I'm eager to read something about Mercy or Widowmaker
Thank you both for your reviews and feedback. Glad you enjoyed the first chapter. I'll expand more on the spanker's feelings in the future. And worry not, Mercy and Widowmaker will be involved in some spankings in future chapters. There will be more D.Va and Soldier 76 too.
