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File Name: Nanami's Secret (19.3 KB) Download
Author: Zekel (Uploaded by Zekel)
Date Added: May 20th, 2013
Downloads: 298
Grade: A
Description
Thanks to fireball's encouraging words, I decided to share a story too. It doesn't compare to the beautiful stories others have written, but I hope you enjoy it.

It's been fun reading people's entries and seeing the different approaches everyone takes and the things they focus on. Like some wrote from the perspective of the boys; some gave a story for her pouch which I just assumed to be omamori; or some decided that she was on her way home and not to school.

My choice was, well, uncreative - I went with the basic mother/daughter spanking scenario and focused on why she'd get it in the morning. For a girl her age, I just felt a warm, maternal spanking was the best fit... Hey, I know what I like :P. Anyway, it was fun to write; if it was fun to read, that would be just splendid.
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Comments
spankula
May 25th, 2013 at 04:50 AM
Pretty decent!
Nerine
May 28th, 2013 at 03:20 AM
Your story was very cute! You wrote a distinct character who acted her age, so very realistic! Such a creative implement also (the shoe horn). I'll have to think about using that one some time. <3 The ending was also very sweet, with Mai defending Nanami. One thing to improve on is being consistent with your style of quoting thoughts, whether it be actual quotes, italicizing, etc. Overall, adorable story.
Akuma
June 9th, 2013 at 05:27 AM
very enjoyable


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