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File Name: Raising Ranko - Chapter 1 (34.4 KB) Download
Author: zae (Uploaded by zae)
Date Added: August 31st, 2011
Downloads: 113
Grade: B
Description
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A F/f Ranma 1/2 fic, where Ranma is trapped in his female body, so turns to his mother, only for her to re-raise him as her daughter Ranko.
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gin
September 1st, 2011 at 12:31 AM
Another Ranma's mom teaches him about his feminine side/stuck as a girl fic. I think those may be two of the most common ranma plots out there.

That aside, its a pretty good start, good enough that I certainly want to keep reading.

If I have one criticism its that its a bit short, which results in some things being skimmed over. Like everyone reacting to Ranma being stuck in female form, Shampoo's being cured and the ramifications thereof ect. Even the scene where his mother convinces him to try being a girl felt a bit rushed.

Like I said this is pretty good, and I know that the stuff isn't really the focus of the story, so this is a small complaint, but improvement to pacing would improve the story.


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