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/Naruto spanking story. Sequel to "Healing Hurt" https://animeotk.com/forum/downloads.php?do=file&id=1270 Hinata and Naruto continue to explore their relationship as Hinata risks everything to prove herself to Naruto and to herself. I know I mentioned a sequel a while ago but I finally managed to finish it! Hope you like it.
I know everybody wants reviews and nobody wants to write them lol cuz it takes too much time, but if anyone would be so kind, I would eternally grateful for feed back
I think this was a very good follow up story. I read Healing Hurt on fanfiction.net first, but I really like the feel of concern and love you put in the story. Healing hurt was also one I enjoyed. I hope you continue to write more!
My only recommendation is technical; ease up on the adjectives and adverbs. In general, getting creative with nouns and verbs makes for more effective writing than including countless descriptors. Show, don't tell, the old saying goes.
