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Jen's poking of Cléo's limits ends up in a failed kidnapping attempt, a hard spanking, and a turning point in history.
This is a LONG chapter. It contains several narrative attempts- character development, Cleó's display going Terminator-style and an acual fight. Be fairly warned that the fight against the kidnappers would probably be considered grim and brutal.
I know it's taking me damn long to pen successive entries. More so now, than the actual RP material I had with Mina has ran out, and she's, as you know, busy with other affairs and not in the best of moments. Truth is, I'm not in my best moment either. I had this sorted out for two months, and I have picked it up and left it more times than I can count. But finally, here you are. It has been long, it has drained me and made me proud, I have poured more tenacity and feeling in it that I remember having done in any other entry, and each and every word hurt as it came out.
I don't know what will become of Cléo after this. The grand finale scene is already half written. I don't know if I will attempt to continue or if this will end here and now. Writing is an ungrateful mistress, and right now I don't know if this whole enterprise has been a worthy endeavour or simply a waste of time, pretty much as the last 16 years or so of my life have been. When I decide this, I'll decide what to do with them.
Until them, do enjoy the story. Because I'm not sure if I do anymore.
Wonderful story, I enjoyed it outright. It's good to read something that has its bright and dark moments and that dares to be 'extra' without eagerly jumping to 'extreme'.
I do hope you'll continue this as the characters are well developed and interesting, you know to involve some psychology and you don't make things monotonous simply, there's always something new and even the old things gets different shades for interest.
Please don't stop just yet, it's so great to read this.^^
This is really good, really really good, in fact its some of the best spanking story I have ever read, I love it. I really can't think of anything else to say.
I'm not ashamed to say this.....I started playing my Billy Idol collection on my iTunes as soon as I read the first part of this chapter ! XD XD XD
Jen here is doing what most teens do, rebelling. It's natural, common place, and a rite of passage that we all go through. Everyone's methods are different, ranging from smoking cigarettes to going to forbidden parties, shop lifting to sneaking out at night. Some of us still rebel a little bit as full adults, a healthy practice if done right and safely. It's the thrill of the taboo, and the sense of adventure....getting away with something and keeping it as a much cherished secret. These tend to be some of our fondest memories.
Getting caught ? Not so fond.
The part with Jen sneaking down the stairs, priceless. So darn familiar ! *Circe smiles shyly*
Jen's blooming attraction to Cleo and the android's shapely body ? I cannot blame her one bit, I would be harboring the very same naughty thoughts myself. I'm totally guilty !! :3
The rumble scene, very intense. Made me think of both Ghost In The Shell, and Dorothy from Big O. Androids are dangerous foes, you should make sure that they are on your side.
The internal coding that scrolls by as Cleo shifts from caretaker to mama bear is excellent, and the interaction between Cleo and Jen right afterwards makes total sense. The section leading up to Jen's co-operation and own alteration of her punishment is bittersweet and poignant. She recognizes how much trouble she caused, and the potential damage to her relationship with Cleo...despite the fact that Cleo would never hate nor stop loving Jen.
I'm almost in tears right now....sorry...
Awesome series. Thank you 2 so much for sharing. *Circe hugs tight tight tight*
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