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File Name: Origin of Dayereth - Chapter 1 - Imprisonment (7.7 KB) Download
Author: Noname206 (Uploaded by Noname206)
Date Added: January 24th, 2011
Downloads: 36
Grade: Not Rated
Description
The story begins with a young rogue, Dayereth, captured by the authorities, for this elven boy has committed a grievous crime. Luckily for him, his captor's true target is the mastermind pulling his strings. Unluckily for him, they need his bosses name, and he's not willing to give it to them. Maybe a good hard spanking will persuade him to feel differently...

M/m spank in this one; part two has F/m spank

This is my first spanking fiction I've ever written. Its actually an adaptation of another story I've been inspired to write. Sorry it isn't that long but combining the next part with it would have made it really long. Will upload part two immediately. If you like the story please let me know! thank you <3
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iconoclast
February 4th, 2011 at 03:47 PM
You've created an intriguing character in Dayereth. Clearly there is more to him than meets the eye and I'm interested to find out what it is. A good literary hook is hard to find, especially among new writers, so this is really promising. A little more description of the setting - and of his captors - would make the story more complete. Nothing long winded or drawn out, mind you. A few well crafted sentences about each would make all the difference in the world.

I hope to see more from you.


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