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Well, I spent an hour and a half-two hours writin a full description of the full treatment the delinquent Ariadne got from the paddle-pulley, and I didn't have much more to go. But I had to put my laptop down for a moment, and when I came back--well, everything I had written was gone, lost, swallowed up, deleted, irrecoverable, and that kind of thing has happened to me a number of times--but, of course, only after I've written a lot. So., if you don't mind, I'll hace to try again tomorrow--tired as I am from doing all that work with nothing to show for it. Sorry--I'll try again tomorrow.

I've read it. I'm cool with whatever you would like to do, but I only play as a spankee. o: Did you have any ideas?

Hey, if your not on hiatas I would love to Rp more. People need to be spanked brotha!

You mean Ariadne's paddling? Because I can do that, in a lot more detail. And I can show you her typical behavior after her punishing experience. Would you like that?

I have a question. I understand how the alternate paddling-butt scrubbing work--and Ariadne screams in fury, frustration, pain and humiliation at each really, really HARD stroke of the flat of the hairbrush, and I would suggest that the brush end of the paddle be really, really rough so that the butt-scrubbing is painful, and maybe they can use lye soap. But its not totally clear to me how the mouth-scrubbing implement works to me. Does the brush exten over the girl's head or under the chin? And how does it get a girl's mouth open? Maybe it has recourse to the nose, "almost human" as it is, and begins rubbing soap into her nostrils, which I think is worse than lathering it in the mouth, and, when the girl finally opens her mouth--very soon: she has to breathe--the machine sticks in a mouth-sized brush and begins scrubbing. (cont. above]

In that posirion Ariadne begins screaming and yelling--mainly obscenities--and flails her arms and fists up her hands in tremendous anger. Sinultaneously she begins kicking her legs and feet as hard as she can--but she's caught. So the girl, in this position, can barely feel another of the pulley arms pulling up her silken dress, put she yells when the same arms, to her total humiliation, pulls her panties down. Again she fists her hands and flails her arms, kicks her legs and feet, and SCREAMS--obscenities or other commands, as girls do when they are totally angry and frustrated! To keep her stationary (this is just and idea--what do you think?), an arm extends and clamps her by the feet, another clamps her by the hands [cont. above].

As far as the description of Ariadne's punishments are concerned, is it possible to be more descriptive. You don't have to go into detail about things that make you uncomfortable. But you can describe their bodily movements once caught and their vocal reactions. . . . So to her surprise, though of course it's happened to her before, Ariadne is surreptitiously followed by the paddle pulley. She senses something behind her, but before she can even try to run away one of the pulley's arms reaches out and captures her by the waist, clamping her and raising her from the ground, head and arms and torso on one side, butt, legs and feet on the other. [cont. above]

Your speaking about Arianna, right? Well, as I see it, when your OC begins attending St. Adrian's, isn't she rather shy, timid? Of course, she's really afraid of that pulley and other spanking machines she knows. But, as it happens, doesn't she first witness at least part of Ariadne's paddling? That scares her, so she goes outside to get away from it. But, after hearing (Ariadne's?) cries while she's paddled / butt-scrubbed and mouth-soaped, I guess the effect of the loud yells of the girl have the effect of making Arianna less shy about yelling. Maybe that's not what you want to represent, but Arianna's cry after she hits the ground is louder than it would otherwise hve been if she hadn't heard Ariadne's yells. [Cont. above]

Yes but I'm not very familiar with sister location.

Well I can't see want you're up to off it lol