Heyas
You've got to be kidding, right?
I know you havn't been on the site very long, but people who post very, very rough MS PAINT pics get absolutely battered.
I've removed the pics.
https://animeotk.com/forum/showthread...kaki-9685.html
Please read this thread about the AotK Oekaki, its a free web program for drawing and in a flash based browser program it is 10x better than MS PAINT.
We also have a forum section with half-a-dozen tutorials on drawing using layers, lineart and colouring techniques - all of which can be applied to the Oekaki.
Or you can go off and use a dozen other free programs available on the internet.
You're not a bad artist it seems, your lineart isn't bad at all (basic, but not bad - the fault of PAINT I assume) so unless you want the beat-down that posting the stuff involves on this site, I suggest taking some advice and drawing something better.
I really hope you take my advice. MS PAINT ruins pictures. Do not use it.