[ Sarah Hooper's Choices ] Game
 

Here is the link to the downloadable file: http://www.mediafire.com/file/1ppjru...ices.html/file

This is a Twine story, and as of right now it doesn't have and pictures or audio files. I don't currently have any plans to add any, but if someone wants to try and collaborate to add some in the future, I wouldn't necessarily be against it. I will refer to this as a game, but I guess you could also refer to it as a choose-your-own-adventure story. It is written primarily in the 2nd person.

I believe that this should be the final version for now, but I created a lot of choices on this and it's possible that there are a few mistakes here and there. If you see any significant mistakes, please tell me and I'll try to fix them at some point and maybe release a second version with the mistakes fixed if necessary, but for now all of the links should lead somewhere.

Anyways, here's some additional information: This story is primarily M/f and F/f, but there it is possible to get an F/m and at least a few implied occasions of M/m. You are primarily the spankee, but it is possible to become the spanker on a few occasions. There are many occasions where you may be the passive observer to another person's spanking. Most of the spankings are deserved, but there are some instances of unfair spankings as well.

The choice you make at the beginning of the game is VERY important! It is basically 3 different stories just depending on the choice you make there. Also, there are some long branches of stories that only open up after making a somewhat unlikely combination of choices. If there is demand for it, I might try to reveal the paths to get to some of the harder to find branches of the story, but for now, just know that they exist.

All 3 beginning choices have at least one path where you do not get spanked but if you are not spanked, you should always be able to observe at least one spanking. If you choose the 1st or 3rd beginning routes, then avoiding a spanking is fairly easy if you don't do anything that would probably result in a spanking (though there are still a lot of options that can result in you getting spanked if you misbehave or volunteer for a spanking). For the 2nd one it is possible to completely avoid getting spanked, but it requires more work and there is a high chance of failure. Your odds of getting spanked at least once are high.

Your character is a high schooler of a non-specific age at a high school that has some spanking policies which would be considered extremely inappropriate anywhere else. Your character could be an absolute spankophile who sexually obsesses over spankings, or she could hate them but find them difficult to avoid from time to time. There are some sexual scenes, but they are avoidable if you want to avoid them. The game can purely be about spankings that are not enjoyed or your character misbehaving and trying (and usually failing) to avoid getting spanked.

All compliments, critiques, suggestions, questions, and other comments are welcome. I don't have a lot of experience in this sort of thing and some parts took a lot more time than I would've thought! I wrote this on and off over a number of months so if at any point you feel that there is a severe tonal shift, I suddenly change from one tense to another, or there is something that just doesn't make sense, feel free to tell me. I think I fixed most of those sorts of problems, but once again, can't promise that they're all fixed. Hope you have fun with it!

Sounds really interesting, and I would love to give it a try, but I can't get the file to download to my pad :(

Not very tech-savvy, me...

good job! Nice little game

Absolutely loved it! There's a ton of diversity in the story that plays out based on each choice, which I really liked. I was amazed by the sheer number of spanking scenes that could be found and how they can be varied by your choices. And they were sexy to read to boot! Great job!

I keep getting error when down loading any tips

What a great game! I love the sheer amount of choices you have and how they all affect the outcomes. The only thing that's missing, in my opinion, is some kind of grading system that tells you how you did in the end.
I look forward to your next project!

>Sounds really interesting, and I would love to give it a try, but I can't get the file to download to my pad
>Not very tech-savvy, me...

Yeah, sorry, I don't know if it's possible to make it work on a tablet or not, I've only run it on PC. If anyone knows if there's a way to make this sort of game work on more platforms, please tell me!

>Absolutely loved it! There's a ton of diversity in the story that plays out based on each choice, which I really liked. I was amazed by the sheer number of spanking scenes that could be found and how they can be varied by your choices. And they were sexy to read to boot! Great job!

Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it!

>I keep getting error when down loading any tips

Hmm, what browser are you using? Also, have you had any problems downloading other games from Mediafire before? It's a pretty basic HTML program I believe.

>What a great game! I love the sheer amount of choices you have and how they all affect the outcomes. The only thing that's missing, in my opinion, is some kind of grading system that tells you how you did in the end.
I look forward to your next project!

Thanks for the feedback! I actually intentionally did not create any hints of if you did good or bad. You decide if you had success based on what you want. Do you want to completely avoid getting spanked while watching it happen to other people? Do you just want to avoid public embarrassment? Do you think you ought to have as much punishment and embarrassment as possible? Are you an absolute spankophile that enjoys getting spanked and exposed frequently? I didn't create any grading system because I want the user to determine what they think a fun spanking story should look like and I don't want to tell the user that they are wrong because they enjoy seeing their character get spanked as often as possible or for strategically avoiding getting spanked to enjoy watching it happen to others.

Essentially, you win if you get the sort of spanking fiction you like, and you lose if you don't, but try again and you might get what you like. However, if many people want me to create a grading system or more clear objectives, I'll keep that in mind if I make another similar game. Just one question, should the objective be to get spanked more, spanked less, or some other issue like solving a mystery that just so happens to have spankings woven into the story?

I love this! I especially like the variety of the scenarios you've created, and I like that everything is pretty fleshed out. There aren't any dead ends or choices that lead to just one or two lines of text. This is probably my favorite game on here, which is saying something, since this community has been able to put out some awesome work!

I'd love to you expand on it in the future!

Thanks, that's quite a compliment! I don't know what my next project will be, but probably something with a similar format.

That was fun! X/f isn't my usual first choice, but this was a well-made little game with good writing. I will say that at some point you either did a find/replace or a word-variable with the word "teenager", because it shows up in a few sentences it shouldn't. :)