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Old April 10th, 2020, 11:22 AM   #7
42idiot
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Loved it, such a nice CYOA.

Loved the little pop culture references, as an avid "Army of Darkness" fan that witch spell seemed familiar (yeah I know the "spell" comes from another movie, but I first heard it there).

Loved also the simple gameplay, with clear choices and actions.
I suggest to do "chapters" so after the initial "who am I" questions we get to choose where to start:
- if we choose chapter one (this one) we get this game and then continue with the rest of the chapters
- if we choose another chapter we get to choose what ending we got in the earlier chapters, we start directly from it and then continue with the rest of the chapters

So no need to enable a saving mechanic!
I can see that this system may get complicated as the game becomes more complex. Take these suggestions with a pinch of salt.

Can't wait for more, I loved
 
the apprentice ending
and can't wait to explore the game more.

 

For what I saw, the 3 endings are quite different:


A- the "ignorance is bliss" is the saddest ending, but opens up for more scenes in the other museums, with different "spankubuses"
Possibilities: wax scenes and succubs scenes

B- the apprentice ending is what I'd love to see more, for your sanity I suggest to just give our hero errands in the other museums to replicate the scenes added for the "ignorance" ending, adding spice with scenes with Mabel and/or other characters.

This ending also gives us the possibility to try out some "specific behaviour settings" with the wax spankers, like the "resist" option without enabling the dom ending or a "super demonic doom mode" when things go wrong.

To be honest, I'm looking forward for scenes with some "double spankings" where Mabel (or a wax spanker or someone else) and another one (wax spanker, succubs, anyone) spank us together or a "all in scene" where everyone (every wax spanker) play together, interacting with each other and spanking (the MC) together.

Oh and what about that "cousin" Mabel speaks of? I'd love some scenes with her too, double the succubs, double the fun! Maybe let her become an apprentice too, with "spanking rights" since she is family but both have to be sure to not "overdo" since Mabel may become jealous.
Double spankings? watching some scenes where the cousin get spanked? tease her to develop a relationship and get both in trouble (yes I'd love some teasing for spanking options).
So much possibilities: wax, Mabel, cousin, other succubs!

C- I can't really say anything for dom mode, maybe going around closing the museums with Seline? But of course the hero need to learn his enemy so he has to try the museums a few times (so the same scenes for the "ignorance ending") and then surprise the owner
Possibilities: wax scenes, succubs scenes and of course scenes with Seline


Anyway, enough rambling for today.

P.S.: I'm joking, here a new idea: scenes "out of the museum" with the characters... maybe even in public!
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