I wrote this Undertale story recently.
https://www.deviantart.com/masterveg...ence-855638891
I know there are lots of Undertale fans here, so I hope you guys like it! The theory that the player is a different entity from Frisk and Chara kinda inspired me that story, lol. Add to it that few games interact more with the player than Undertale, and, yeah. ^_^
Anyway, do you guys think this story is better as an one shot, or should I continue?
I'm having trouble thinking on ways to continue it if I do decide to do more chapters. Since I usually prefer female spankers, I guess I COULD have Rodrigo get over Toriel, Undyne, Alphys, Muffet and Mad Mew Mew's lap....but then I'd probably end up leaving Frisk and Chara behind, and as you can see from the story above, Frisk, Chara and Rodrigo are kinda meant to be equal in importance on this story, so I need to find ways to make them important on the story,too.
Specially since I already on this chapter alone had Frisk develop a big sis relationship with Rodrigo, for instance!
Well, since the three of them share the same body, and can talk and interact with each other either on Rodrigo's mind, or when there's a "Game Over" and he joins them in Judgement Hall before the revival...
Oh, and for any Undertale fan out there, "Judgement Hall" is meant to look like the place Chara fights Sans, but without doors and the windows being unable to be open.
Kinda like a infinite world shaped like it where Rodrigo, Chara and Frisk can interact with each other, probably shaped after Chara's memories, since all three of the children's souls share the same body.
If I'd have to write about the "real world" version of the Judgement Hall, the actual place the Sans fight took place, I'd probably call it "Last Corridor" to differenciate.