Played a little of your game, it was interesting.
Especially since I played the opposite of what you intended... getting spanked as much as I could.
I love that with Tora I managed to get a +1 Respect after getting spanked, so I got to hire the spanker (I messed up every day to get punished after work so I got zero respect from work lol).
Besides the obvious the people already told you, here some quick ideas:
1- More consequences for failure. This could go to interesting scenes, since the vice (the girl who help/punishes us) will sure ask why we keep failing. This could lead to some serious talk besides the punishment, even advancing a bit of romance or unlocking new mechanics (like reward spankings if we got right and nothing if we failed) or just tallks about homesickness, responsibility, stress etc.. It will sure add some variety for the scenes that counts (the relationships with characters) and advance a bit of story of the characters.
1.5- What's the "discipline" stat for? maybe it's used for the employees? I didn't check since I played "the wrong way" lol
2- More scenes with Olivia (I believe it's the name of hired spanker, right?), since she teases us in the beginning of her first day. It's probably a thing for the romance but I would love to get spanked before/after the day. Maybe the MC could ask to "test her skills".... or maybe the vice (the one who punishes us for failures) could ask her for a double spanking if we fail? Or we need "a talk" after sending her the wrong orders? Or we get the pressure of our position and we ask her for suggestions?
3- I'm sure more scenes with the vice are planned since we see her in her room during the evening.... be aware that the character is both at work and in her room "at the same time", let her go away after we exit the room/building. She needs some rest, poor girl!
4- Are you going to open some houses, maybe the one of the character we hire (since the bodyguard lives in the building and the vice sleeps at the inn)?
5- Loved the goblin girl!
6- Can't wait for the captain/pirate
7- The other people around the city are just like ghosts, give them some life. A quick word, some personality... and then maybe we could catch some of the girls we sent to punishments! This could lead to some fun talks!
8- More way to spend money! I believe it's already planned since we got one building we could enter in the living quarters with nothing to do....
9- a side quest, where new laws arrives so that minor crimes are punished with max sentence and viceversa! Maybe even spanking becomes a crime, which is punished.. with spankings, which could lead all our characters in a loop of trouble, since the justiciar is not above the law itself.
You have some kind of government palace already I believe, maybe a crazy witch or something is making fun... of the law itself? And who is better than the justiciar to fix it (or make it worse!)
So yeah, can't wait for the next update and for new spankee interactions!
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