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'The anger of Mother Lotus' feedback

March 19th, 2021, 09:22 PM	#1
RedDragon30000 Gold Member RedDragon30000 is offline Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,623	'The anger of Mother Lotus' feedback Hey guys, I want to thank those of you who downloaded my story, and also for the grade. The first time someone has graded one of my stories, I really appreciate it. I would appreciate some feedback on this story, as it's the first time I've written a spanking story based on a videogame. Do you think it worked?

April 29th, 2021, 11:43 PM	#2
Salchos Junior Member Salchos is offline Join Date: Jan 2021 Posts: 24	Where to download it? I would like to read your story and give feedback =)

April 30th, 2021, 04:43 AM	#3
RedDragon30000 Gold Member RedDragon30000 is offline Join Date: Aug 2009 Posts: 2,623	https://animeotk.com/forum/downloads...o=file&id=3416 It has spoilers for the quests 'war within ' and 'second dream '

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