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Blake belladonna: A mother's day of discipline |
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March 24th, 2024, 11:27 PM
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victormammoth is offline
Join Date: Jul 2011
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Blake belladonna: A mother's day of discipline
A RWBY Spanking Fanfiction text adventure!
It's campus Mother's Day at Beacon Academy, which means Kali Belladonna is coming to visit. Blake is nervous, because Mother's Day happens to be the same day as report card day...and Blake is in for the spanking of a lifetime!
DOWNLOAD HERE
RWBY is a great show to make spanking fanfiction of. In fact, I've written spanking fanfics of 3 of the 4 huntresses at this point -- everybody but Weiss Schnee! I wonder if there's an adventure in her future...
If you have a commission idea -- especially one for Weiss  -- email me at [email protected].
Let me know what you think - enjoy!
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March 25th, 2024, 02:23 PM
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101557200 is offline
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It's a good story, but there might be some minor problems, I haven't read all the options yet. But when I chose "awful" and then "give Blake another spank", the mother pulled out the hairbrush as before, even though the hairbrush had already been used in the previous punishment.
Thanks for the short story, anyway.
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March 25th, 2024, 10:39 PM
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VikingSpanko is offline
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Hey!
When writing a text adventure, it's the easiest thing in the world to make the main character customisable. Especially for you, who have written so much in Twine.
Would you please consider making future stories with customisable name and gender? Please?
Making choices in a CYOA only feels interesting to me when I'm the main character. I don't care if some girl named Blake get in or out of trouble.
This, I think, is why Puttsdale was such a massive success. You get to interact with the townspeople as yourself, as either a top or a bottom.
Let us know what you think. I'd be happy to show you my solution in Twine for writing the characters with unique customisable genders.
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March 27th, 2024, 12:50 AM
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flashmaster63 is offline
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I don't know anything about RBWY (other than what's been posted on this site) but I enjoyed this. Not my favourite scenario, but a bit unexpected which is always nice. And the usual good descriptions of the action, which is what I love about all your games. Thanks for sharing!
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April 2nd, 2024, 02:49 PM
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HolyMolyManiac is online now
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Another fun read, thanks for sharing.
I personally like Ruby's birthday better, because the dynamic between friends is more fun for me than a Mother/Daughter story. Hope we get also a Weiss one
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April 7th, 2024, 08:47 PM
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mgrant24601 is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by VikingSpanko
Hey!
When writing a text adventure, it's the easiest thing in the world to make the main character customisable.
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For what it is worth, this is not the easiest thing in the world. It's not the hardest thing in the world, but doing so introduces a new set of bugs (cases where you failed to replace a pronoun with a token in your writing) and it makes it harder to make changes to your writing.
I'm not saying this is a bad idea, because I agree that it's a great idea, but I do want to say in the author's defense that what you're asking is not actually a triviality.
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April 7th, 2024, 10:18 PM
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Wildfire is offline
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Quote:
Originally Posted by mgrant24601
For what it is worth, this is not the easiest thing in the world. It's not the hardest thing in the world, but doing so introduces a new set of bugs (cases where you failed to replace a pronoun with a token in your writing) and it makes it harder to make changes to your writing.
I'm not saying this is a bad idea, because I agree that it's a great idea, but I do want to say in the author's defense that what you're asking is not actually a triviality.
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It would also be a really weird thing to do in a RWBY fanfic about Blake xD
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April 8th, 2024, 01:04 AM
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victormammoth is offline
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Thanks for the feedback, everyone!
Yeah, I love adventures that are written in 2nd person too, VikingSpanko, and I write them pretty often (the Belt on the Door, Bitter Rivals, Date Night, and WTP series, to name a few)! They're all on my Patreon, and I've posted a couple here. I've got some clever workarounds for how to deal with pronouns and all that -- you're right, mgrant2461, it can be tricky.
Still, Iagree that adventures where you can "self-insert" as either spanker or spankee rule
As Wildfire notes, though, this was a commission about Blake, so 2nd person wouldn't work. I always write what my commissioner's want to see, and in this case, it was a punishment for the Bellabooty lol. If you have your own idea for a commission definitely email me at [email protected]!!! Sharing your idea is always free
Next time I do a 2nd person text adventure, maybe you'll see it here -- who knows? There could even be one coming out soon........
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