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Old May 13th, 2007, 01:32 PM   #11
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Those Naruto fics will also be coming here eventually.
Excellent, will the YYH chapters appear as well eventually eventually?

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It's been forever since I thought about these stories, but I've now started working on Part Eight. ;]
I look forward to that. But I fear the 16 problem won't be solved without more red bottoms. Having said that even though all the full and demi-saiyans on earth will be sleeping on their stomachs there is still one who is one spanking down.
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Modern vs. Traditional Naruto M/M
Old June 21st, 2007, 11:15 AM   #12
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Modern vs. Traditional Naruto M/M
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I don't want to give away too much to those who haven't read it but the story involves Guy and Kakashi, is fun, but still involves a well described rump-roasting. As far as I can tell, stays in-character although it deals with aspects of the Gai-Kakashi relationshio I've not reached in the anime or manga. . Rather to my surprise Guy manages to catch out Kakashi.

It ends rather abruptly, so I hope that means after dealing with "traditional" it will be continued to examine the "modern".
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Old July 4th, 2007, 08:22 PM   #13
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*~*~* SPOILERS *~*~*

TT TT Oh my God, Croup, that was so YOUTHFUL. ;_; I mean... wow! It was so in-character, as per usual, so... hotly (yeah, red! For white is too harsh on the old eyes) described that I was literally at a loss for words when I first read it (read it like... a bazillion times now) and a number of times after. But you already knew that. >_>

It was, as this thread has already summarised: 'sexy awesomeness'. Kakashi totally doesn't need Icha Icha when he can trick poor Gai into anything he wants. ...I mean... washing his mask, and... polishing his ANBU dog-tags. And stuff. Although you know what I feel was lacking, but I won't go into that... X3 Mwehehehe...

I always thought that Kakashi would be too lazy if he kept up an energetic spanking like that up for half an hour (unless there was more to it than the violence~! Love-uuu... lust-uuu...)... unless he had something to occupy him self with... like... reading Icha Icha in one hand, and... well, slapping tanned jounin behind with the other. Or playing with a mini-game. But then you need two hands for that, and I think that isn't really Kakashi's thing in the first place... o_O [Confused self]

KakaGai, GaiKaka, KakaGai, GaiKaka, KakaGai... It's sooo cuuute! And you pulled it off (...) so well! And to have Gai's little… well… table turn at the end was also very in-character, I feel, considering the number of times Kakashi is like: Y_T "Wh-what?" with Gai. After all, Gai is the 'innocent' one of the two, so Kakashi has really had it long in coming. What with his being so late so often, that evil illusion he played on poor Sakura, JANKENPON, and so on...

I wonder if someone who has endured 72 hours of brutal torture can endure half an hour of a vengeful Maito Gai with a cane and a strap? X> Ouch, ouch!

Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU so MUCH for writing it, Soupy (mwah-ha!), and you know I'd totally at your beck and call from now on... darn you. v_v Writing stuff I like and making me all grateful...
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