change of mothers pt1 alpha

[Axelcrzc]

This is an alpha I mean things can change illustrated scenes I'm not very good but I keep it the game is still in development I hope you like it
download here
https://www.mediafire.com/file/9nbf9...ha+1.html/file

[Axelcrzc]

I will do my best to improve the game

[Haunting Fire]

First of all, quite a number of scenes don't appear to load properly, as there a several instances where sentences don't load (for example, when Ale asks you to skip class with him, it doesn't finish the sentence of what he wants to do. Also, when you switch mothers and Daniela calls you to talk, some of the sentences there don't finish. This sort of thing happens in several other spots as well)

Another thing, some of the text isn't in English. For the most part this is fine, it's typically just a word or two, but if you choose to skip class with Ale then the entire following page is in Spanish, which I, at least, cannot read, so I'm not sure what happened other than you get caught skipping class.

I do like the premise of "trading" mothers/children for week, and I think this will be a very nice game to play once more content is introduced. I really like that there is illustrated scenes, as those always make a game better. I hope you continue this, I think there's strong potential here

[Maste]

I like the concept of your game and your illustrations! I'm curious how you can improve your game.

If you need help with writing scenes or dialoge, you can PM me and I try to help I you want.

[sss]

Great concept and I hope you continue it. The random transition from english to Spanish was weird, maybe someone can help you translate