story uploading

[helen spanking]

Hello!

I have been planing to write a story about X/f spanking where X can be M, F or machine.


But my question is where once the story has been written can I upload it?

Since there is not a writtings sub forum where it can be ulpoaded?

[RobM]

Hola

Re-using handy thread.

In response to your query about feedback on the story and spotting errors, I've made a quick markup of your last posting. I don't normally do this and your story isn't entirely to my personal tastes but I had a spare hour and I was in the mood to be constructive, please find the PDF attached with my feelings.

Mostly I've changed up with how I'd write it which I hope you find useful. I'm not telling you to change anything: I only provide this in case it's useful to you in future for your later chapters, I know you're not a native English speaker so I've tried to be helpful.

Mostly it's about not being vague with the subject (everyone is a 'they', 'things containing things'... that sort of stands out to me), 'In' instead of 'On', not starting too many sentances with 'And'... and I've tried to make a suggestion for shaking up who the narrator is talking to. In this case, the curious reader.

This is just a one-off and I know you didn't specifically ask for it, I just hope it's helpful.