[Final Spankasy] Text-based game

[00Spank]

Hello all! I am taking my first crack at the can with a text-game. I started writing it and then I wanted to create an interactive spanking mechanic so I started working on the mini-game functionality and it took on a life of its own. I have written about 50,000 that has yet to be implemented as I need to figure out how to incorporate a time mechanic in twine.

Anyways, in it's current form it is essentially a spanking simulator with some random generation. Actions the girls take build your anger, which you need to spank them, and each spanking builds your authority which will slowly open up more options.

Please try it out and let me know your feedback on how it works, the writing in general, bugs, and even any ideas/suggestions you may have (not to mention helpful tips for doing things in twine!). For reporting bugs that occur during a spanking I need to know what position the spanking was and if it was on clothes, panties, or bare.

V 0.1: https://drive.google.com/drive/folde...VC?usp=sharing

Current build involves you and your two daughters: Rinoa and Tifa.

Future-Planned Characters:
- Aranea (written)
- Yuffie (written)
- Cid (partially written)
- Fang - (partially written)
- Vanille (partially written)
- Rikku (partially written)
- Beatrix (written introduction)

Beyond these characters I will take polls and such to see who people want to see, and in what kind of roles.

Current content:
- Spanking with 4 positions in your room
- Spanking on the spot unlocked with a high level of authority
- Hand spanking
- Timeouts

Future content:
- PJ spanking
- Public spanking
- Nude spankings
- "training" spanking scenes
- Sex (not much atm)
- Group Spanking
- Implements
-- Hairbrush
-- Belt
-- Ruler
-- Paddle
-- Switch
- 3rd party spanking (you allow or witness)

Enjoy!

[Banjo]

Aerith? Is Aerith in it? What about Aerith? Can I spank Aerith?

Sorry, been playing FFVIIR a bit too much lately.

Seriously, though, the concept is very cool! Great idea!

Given all the characters you're looking to introduce, do you mind if I make a suggestion though? Instead of making the player a single dad, why not make them the new head of a "home for girls". Reformatory/half-way house/orphanage/refuge/whatever. It would allow you to have a ton of FF girls in your "care", maintain the same dynamic (yet not make you have to have ten or more kids) and even allow some interesting dynamics with the more... naughty young ladies! It would also feel like a proper part of many FF game's universes, where such places do occasionally appear.

As to the game right now, I hit a few bugs; I am unable to "Head Outside", got a strange error with "This will teach you to laugh at your sister when she is getting a spanking!" appearing when it doesn't seem right, as well as a few missing spaces and garbled dialog ("The girl,Your daughter,Tifa" or "tautbottomdancing" and even "Rinoa hurries to their room sobbing and holding their red bottom." after I'd spanked them both) but nothing that froze the game.

My main question would be: can I have more choice in how to spank? For instance, I was told I took Tifa to the bedroom but why not spank her right there in the living room? I was also told my spanking over clothes wasn't having an effect... but no option to step things up? Also, I still am stuck on otk and my hand after four spankings... when do other things unlock?

What governs when a spanking has to end? Sometimes I can spank for ages, other times I can only "End spanking" after three or four clicks.

Initially, I thought the writing was a bit "bare bones", however I noticed that later the descriptions *really* pick up and become longer and more vivid. Some of the later spankings (reactions, dialog, etc.) are pretty hot! I do think maybe some more attention needs to be focused on the earlier-level ones; as I said, I was really impressed with the later-stage ones though.

I do like being able to "just" scold... will there be a way to *not* spank enough and thus end up with a house of wild brats wrecking the place everywhere I go (and driving my anger through the roof)?

It can be daunting, but randomization is IMO key to a good text game like this, where you are basically replaying the same few events over and over, but want them to be different each time.

I would love to be able to build "relationships" - almost dating-sim-like - in the long run, too... either maybe one "fears" or dislikes me because I'm always spanking her without warning, while another might respect or even enjoy her discipline due to how I approach her spankings.

Can we also maybe play as a "tyrant"? By that I mean... be allowed to spank when it's *not* deserved? Maybe have another stat that rises when you give unfair spankings versus deserved ones? This could affect relationships as well as preventing naughtiness *before* it happens?

I think the main appeal this game would have among other "spanking simulators" is making sure each character feel like who they're supposed to be (if I'm spanking Rikku, I want to spank Rikku not just some girl with her name) and maybe even that the game feels like it *could* happen in a FF style game universe. When I clicked the game to run, I imagined the FF theme playing...

Oh, and don't forget easter eggs for us FF fans, either! It would be funny and cute to walk in on a girl who's cuddling a stuffed Moogle toy after her spanking... or to catch naughty Tifa rubbing herself while looking at a porno mag called "Seventh Heaven".

One last thing: maybe use quotation marks for when characters are talking? I like lots of dialog in my spankings, but formatting would look better if you book-ended dialog that way, IMO.

In any case, I'm excited to see this developed further.

Incidentally, I've been working with Twine a *lot* lately (in fact, I'm about to post my first game made with that in a day or two!) so happy to help with anything regarding that if need be. I'm more used to Sugarcube 2 than Harlowe, but have used that a little in the past. What are you using?

PS I would *love* any chance to *be* spanked by Quistis, Lulu or Tifa if that's ever an option, by the way. Or anything with Aerith.

PPS I don't think poor Yuffie or Rikku will be sitting down much when they get added to the game! Will you be making it so certain characters are more disobedient or prone to certain "offenses" than others?

PPPS Just got flipped off by Rinoa and then she called me an asshole! Really made me laugh imagining that. Also, "You walk in to find Tifa watching porn" is a sentence I never thought I'd read.

[00Spank]

Originally Posted by Banjo

Aerith? Is Aerith in it? What about Aerith? Can I spank Aerith?

Sorry, been playing FFVIIR a bit too much lately.

Seriously, though, the concept is very cool! Great idea!

Given all the characters you're looking to introduce, do you mind if I make a suggestion though? Instead of making the player a single dad, why not make them the new head of a "home for girls". Reformatory/half-way house/orphanage/refuge/whatever. It would allow you to have a ton of FF girls in your "care", maintain the same dynamic (yet not make you have to have ten or more kids) and even allow some interesting dynamics with the more... naughty young ladies! It would also feel like a proper part of many FF game's universes, where such places do occasionally appear.

As to the game right now, I hit a few bugs; I am unable to "Head Outside", got a strange error with "This will teach you to laugh at your sister when she is getting a spanking!" appearing when it doesn't seem right, as well as a few missing spaces and garbled dialog ("The girl,Your daughter,Tifa" or "tautbottomdancing" and even "Rinoa hurries to their room sobbing and holding their red bottom." after I'd spanked them both) but nothing that froze the game.

My main question would be: can I have more choice in how to spank? For instance, I was told I took Tifa to the bedroom but why not spank her right there in the living room? I was also told my spanking over clothes wasn't having an effect... but no option to step things up? Also, I still am stuck on otk and my hand after four spankings... when do other things unlock?

What governs when a spanking has to end? Sometimes I can spank for ages, other times I can only "End spanking" after three or four clicks.

Initially, I thought the writing was a bit "bare bones", however I noticed that later the descriptions *really* pick up and become longer and more vivid. Some of the later spankings (reactions, dialog, etc.) are pretty hot! I do think maybe some more attention needs to be focused on the earlier-level ones; as I said, I was really impressed with the later-stage ones though.

I do like being able to "just" scold... will there be a way to *not* spank enough and thus end up with a house of wild brats wrecking the place everywhere I go (and driving my anger through the roof)?

It can be daunting, but randomization is IMO key to a good text game like this, where you are basically replaying the same few events over and over, but want them to be different each time.

I would love to be able to build "relationships" - almost dating-sim-like - in the long run, too... either maybe one "fears" or dislikes me because I'm always spanking her without warning, while another might respect or even enjoy her discipline due to how I approach her spankings.

Can we also maybe play as a "tyrant"? By that I mean... be allowed to spank when it's *not* deserved? Maybe have another stat that rises when you give unfair spankings versus deserved ones? This could affect relationships as well as preventing naughtiness *before* it happens?

I think the main appeal this game would have among other "spanking simulators" is making sure each character feel like who they're supposed to be (if I'm spanking Rikku, I want to spank Rikku not just some girl with her name) and maybe even that the game feels like it *could* happen in a FF style game universe. When I clicked the game to run, I imagined the FF theme playing...

Oh, and don't forget easter eggs for us FF fans, either! It would be funny and cute to walk in on a girl who's cuddling a stuffed Moogle toy after her spanking... or to catch naughty Tifa rubbing herself while looking at a porno mag called "Seventh Heaven".

One last thing: maybe use quotation marks for when characters are talking? I like lots of dialog in my spankings, but formatting would look better if you book-ended dialog that way, IMO.

In any case, I'm excited to see this developed further.

Incidentally, I've been working with Twine a *lot* lately (in fact, I'm about to post my first game made with that in a day or two!) so happy to help with anything regarding that if need be. I'm more used to Sugarcube 2 than Harlowe, but have used that a little in the past. What are you using?

PS I would *love* any chance to *be* spanked by Quistis, Lulu or Tifa if that's ever an option, by the way. Or anything with Aerith.

PPS I don't think poor Yuffie or Rikku will be sitting down much when they get added to the game! Will you be making it so certain characters are more disobedient or prone to certain "offenses" than others?

PPPS Just got flipped off by Rinoa and then she called me an asshole! Really made me laugh imagining that. Also, "You walk in to find Tifa watching porn" is a sentence I never thought I'd read.

Thank you so much for your feedback!

You really got a head of me with the reform school as that is where I planned on taking this after meeting someone from the school (it's quistis in my mind as she seems like a natural disciplinarian)

Thank you for the bugs those are easy fixes that I just missed, "Head Outside" i hadn't implemented yet and didn't realize I had made the path for it so thanks!

As for your options, they unlock as you give more spankings at certain authority milestones. Currently positions unlock every 10 points of authority (you get one for each spanking) and then the final unlock is being able to spank them in the room you find them. As for implements I just figured out a way to implement them and am working on sewing that in now. Further, I am adding more variety to the spankings with random events, timeouts, and bedtime pyjama spankings.

What governs when a spanking ends: I did not clearly state this but it is your level of anger, when you aren't mad you let them go (that is how I have it for now). Scolding is a good option to build anger as there is a random chance they are rude, which provides a randomized anger bonus.

You are 100% correct the early spankings are bare-bones in the writing department as I got more into it with each instance through the process so I will have to go back and spice up some of my "first takes" like an OTK with clothes on spanking I would guess was my least amount of writing creativity haha

I love the idea of having them run wild without spankings and acting more naughty... I will investigate that...

I had a chuckle of you mentioning the Moogle doll because I have that written into the pyjama spankings. They cuddle a randomized moogle, moomba, or tonberry. They also have a Moogle PJ onesie with a butt-flap so you can watch the little wings flap as you spank her.

The character specialization is what I have been struggling with actually, except for particular written scenes. I can't figure out how to implement "classes" in twine so that I could call class instances to inject more personality into the spankings. Do you know how I could do this? I am using sugarcube btw

The missed quotation marks was certainly unintentional, just bad editing on my part so thanks for catching it!

You will really enjoy yuffie and rikku's "training" events it sounds like...

I had imagined Lulu coming in as a spanker so that is a possibility

[victormammoth]

I'm lovin' all these text adventures! This one is really fun, and I love the gameplay idea. Hope you keep updating!

I use Twine all the time and would love to help, just PM me. One thing I noticed that would be pretty easy to fix is the spacing. I can tell you have lots of variables working behind the scenes, and it's always easier to space out that code in your if/else statements, but then those sections show as big blank spaces.

To avoid the weird spacing, use the {} symbols. For example, the text below:

{**You've been spanked.

(if:$bottom is "pink")[Your butt is pink.]
(if:$bottom is "red")[Your butt is red.]**}

Will display as this when the variable has been set to "red."

**You've been spanked. Your butt is red.**

See? Let me know if you've got other questions, just shoot me a PM!

[00Spank]

Originally Posted by victormammoth

I'm lovin' all these text adventures! This one is really fun, and I love the gameplay idea. Hope you keep updating!

I use Twine all the time and would love to help, just PM me. One thing I noticed that would be pretty easy to fix is the spacing. I can tell you have lots of variables working behind the scenes, and it's always easier to space out that code in your if/else statements, but then those sections show as big blank spaces.

To avoid the weird spacing, use the {} symbols. For example, the text below:

{**You've been spanked.

(if:$bottom is "pink")[Your butt is pink.]
(if:$bottom is "red")[Your butt is red.]**}

Will display as this when the variable has been set to "red."

**You've been spanked. Your butt is red.**

See? Let me know if you've got other questions, just shoot me a PM!

Awesome thank you I will do that! I have noticed I have a lot of empty space to clean up still haha

[deadp]

Don't forget lighten and Sarah. Are going have it that we can get spank too? Also I try to go outside and nothing happens.

How many different areas are you going to make?

[00Spank]

Originally Posted by deadp

Don't forget lighten and Sarah. Are going have it that we can get spank too? Also I try to go outside and nothing happens.

How many different areas are you going to make?

Sorry re: Outside, that isn't implemented yet.

At the moment I am revamping the code to be cleaner and easier to build on with classes and widgets, and adding more personality to the girls and events.

For places: So far I have written the grocery store, Aranea's House (Aranea and Yuffie), Cid's House (Cid, Fang, Vanille, and Rikku), and a general "patrolling" for driving around to trigger various events. I will be adding more houses as girls are added, a police station, and the school where you will inevitably work.

For girls to add: I will select future charcters based on polls after I finish the events for the charcters and places I have currently.

I am planning on a couple optional f/m scenes (repeatable) but it is not my area so I need some help on ideas for how such a scene should go

[00Spank]

Just wanted to post an update as I have been very busy!

I have overhauled everything in the game to utilize classes and widgets so that I could both inject more personality and variety into the game as well as make it easier to add characters and scenes later!

I have added and implemented implements, incorporated a time system, as well as written about 60,000 words for scenes with new characters.

I am currently writing the nude spanking scenes and editing passages riddled with conditional statements to utilize my new classes and widgets system and should have a jam-packed V 0.2 by the end of the weekend.

In the meantime, I would love to hear what girls people would like to see as students once we get to that part of the game, as well as what other characters could have rolls at the school. (My current plan to introduce the school is through meeting Quistis from FF8 as she seems a natural authority/disciplinarian figure, but I am open to suggestions!)

Have a great weekend all!

[Banjo]

What other girls? How about... AERITH?

Sorry I haven't had chance to get back to you about other stuff, will try over the weekend!

[00Spank]

Hahaha Aerith is on the list!

No worries re:reply. Whenever you have time!