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High School Domestic x Discipline - Review Request
Old November 5th, 2017, 04:38 PM   #1
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Smile High School Domestic x Discipline - Review Request

Hello my friends,

It has been a very, very long time since I last posted a story!

To make up for it though, I spent AGES on this one, well like over a month or something at least! I didn't want to get lazy so I only wrote when I was in the mood; I researched alot of things, I re-watched episodes, I wrote and rewrote dialogue and plot lines over and over in my head at work. I have more sticky notes on the floor by my computer than fall leaves in my yard lol. I just really wanted to contribute something to this community again since it offers me so much. I never pass a day without dropping in at least once! This is actually the first place I posted, however, ff dot net and ao3 didn't have a mod queue so it ended up being public there first, but still I wrote it with this community in mind!

It focuses on a more mature (but still in character) Issei and Akeno and Koneko. M/F
Issei tries to befriend Koneko, but it ends up requiring a lot more work than he originally thought. Through a series of misunderstandings and twists Akeno ends up involved as well. [Further description on the title page in the story.]

I really hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it!

I would be EXTREMELY grateful for any sort of review via comment or on this thread.
I know everyone's busy, but we're all paranoid about our work, right? I do like to continuously improve my writing also!

Okay, enough of this novel-long post! Here ya go: Story Time!

Thanks for giving it a shot!

~Spanktacular

Last edited by spanktacular; November 26th, 2017 at 01:37 AM.
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