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"I don't NEED a spanking, but if you try to GIVE me one I won't stop ya." -Me
"Just put him over your knee already." -My wife #MariaIsBestGirlInSpanquest
I played the demo and it's somewhat enjoyable. Premise seems a bit similar to SpankFantasy 2 (with mildly broken English too, lol), but I like the female-dominated society aspect of it. The 'meta' scene was fun, I'd like to see where it would go from there (oh god I wish it was for real). Here're some weird things/glitches I've noticed while playing:
"Where did I come from" text on the left of the starting tile triggers infinitely.
When you choose "special" when first talking to Lisa, there are no sounds/descriptions during spanking. If you look at Lisa's wares, she won't talk to you anymore so you can miss "special". Also, if you choose "special" not standing across the counter from Lisa, you get softlocked.
House next to Erica has no visible entrance, found out by complete accident that you can go inside.
If you don't talk to Lisa and librarian at the inn, they stay there until the next day. Store remains closed, but library gets open after talking to Hazel, and librarian shows up in two places at the same time.
Ashley(? blonde girl) was at the same time in Erica's house and at the store on the next day.
You can skip talking to Hazel, so she doesn't join your party, but the game acts as if she did, and she participates in dialogues and show up later at the place with two houses.
I missed the 'secret' in the library because I thought something was broken and just exited, and then I was confused later when you get called with an orb. Also the dialogue is different if you talk to librarian from the side, she repeats the same line from last day.
In the small area with two houses, houses have no visible entrances again, found them by accident as well.
When you talk to Carly and choose 'small house' it sets your hp to zero for some reason? So if you spoke to Carly before you spoke to Hazel it will give you a random game over.
When Hazel asks about player's gender, it's really unclear who she's talking about, I first thought we were deciding Carly's gender. Also, if you pick "female", you can't input your name and it shows up as blank.
I couldn't go into what I assume is Lisa's house, even though she told me to visit her after work.
Then I went to school and got really confused when blonde girl said she spanked me, because that never happened. Ms Bella threatened to spank me and Hazel, but when I came back, she didn't want to talk anymore, and the girl was back. On another playthrough the girl just wasn't there, but when I talked to Ms Bella game waited for non-existing girl to walk offscreen. Not sure when you're supposed to be spanked by blonde girl, since you can't come to school at an earlier time it seems.
At this point I don't know what to do, since I can't visit anymore locations and the bridge is solid and won't let me cross the river. Is this the end of the demo?
Now, apart from technical issues mentioned above, there is something that I didn't really like about the game, so if you actually care about criticism here it is (only click on spoiler if you aren't gonna be upset about it):
I just don't really like writing in the game. I realize that English must not be your first language and it might be challenging to write dialogue, but it goes beyond that. Things just don't make much sense. So a guy gets isekaied and loses his memories, and instead of worrying about his situation and figuring out how he got there he goes to study local customs and history. He is also like "there's no way I'm gonna enjoy spankings" and then he goes asking for spankings from pretty much everyone and lets a complete stranger jerk him off with buttplug up his ass. That's just not a believable story. The characters are also flat and don't really have personalities, dialogues aren't great and spanking scenes could definitely use more spoken and descriptive lines too. Map design could use a bit more work too (especially unmarked entrances), but it's a lesser problem. I'm sure you've seen other games from this forum, but if for some reason you haven't, take a look at SpankFantasy 2, which is a perfect example of how to handle a similar situation (gameplay-wise it has a lot of issues though, imo).
If you actually bothered to read my whining, don't feel discouraged. It's a great thing that you're working on a game and it's definitely worth continuing working on it. I suppose other games from this forum have set a quality standard a bit too high, so my expectations are probably a bit unreasonable. Anyway, please keep developing it and creating things that are fun for you.
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