Dark Manor (spring jam 2019-ish)

[Arnal]

I thought it might be something to do with food or the dolls as those both came up in her dialogue, but I can't find anything in that area to interact with and nothing is sparkling for me.

There are sparkles, actually, but they are a bit hard to spot, sorry.

 

food was the good answer, and you can do it by interacting with the empty plates on the table. They are full white so the sparkle don't show clearly on them

[Mondy]

here is the Italian translation of Dark Manor. thanks to Arnal for letting me publish it.

https://www.mediafire.com/file/tzkx9...Mondy.zip/file

[Fariel228]

The game is still not abandoned?

[Mondy]

it should be finished. the story ends. I don't think Arnal intends to expand it.

[Arnal]

@Monello: thanks to you for the effort! My level of italian don't really allow me to give a feedback on the quality of the translation, but it seems to work fine for me.


One minor point though: during the intro, the adventurer's dialog work like normal dialog (text unfolding, press space to go to next textbox) instead of the setting I used in the original version (text fully formed, auto switch from one textbox to the next after a certain time). I assume you removed the special characters in the dialog to get that effect? Thing is, the dialog was timed to be synched with the character's movements, so without it, the scene can feel a bit awkward.


@Fariel228: Yes, the game is pretty much finished. As I mentionned a while back, I thought of maybe expanding it with a "bad" ending and a few extra puzzle piece, but nothing that really added much spanking-wise. And in the meantime I had other creative project to work on, so it was shuffled down on the priority list.


Plus, if I make a new version in the future, I’ll probably redo it from scratch: this was my first completed game and, looking back, it can be pretty clunky at places.

[Shiro.kun]

Hey, i just played your Game. Its a really great game, i love the idea to play the evil. Your Spankings are really well written, i liked them a lot. Hope to see more from you in the future

[Mondy]

Originally Posted by Arnal

@Monello: thanks to you for the effort! My level of italian don't really allow me to give a feedback on the quality of the translation, but it seems to work fine for me.


One minor point though: during the intro, the adventurer's dialog work like normal dialog (text unfolding, press space to go to next textbox) instead of the setting I used in the original version (text fully formed, auto switch from one textbox to the next after a certain time). I assume you removed the special characters in the dialog to get that effect? Thing is, the dialog was timed to be synched with the character's movements, so without it, the scene can feel a bit awkward.


@Fariel228: Yes, the game is pretty much finished. As I mentionned a while back, I thought of maybe expanding it with a "bad" ending and a few extra puzzle piece, but nothing that really added much spanking-wise. And in the meantime I had other creative project to work on, so it was shuffled down on the priority list.


Plus, if I make a new version in the future, I’ll probably redo it from scratch: this was my first completed game and, looking back, it can be pretty clunky at places.

I still have some problems getting the translation program recommended to me to work well. some things get lost and I don't understand why. as soon as i can fix it for sure i will fix it. meanwhile, I'm glad you appreciate it