Beta readers requested

Hey all... I am putting the finishing touches on a non-spanking story that I hope to get published in a Lycanthrope anthology that is being published this winter by Graveside Tales. When I say 'finishing touches' I mean I am almost done with the bare, rough draft and I am ready to start revising it... However, I find the best way to revise it is to get other people's opinion on the story first. So, I am asking you all if there is anyone out there who would be willing to read my non-spanking story (Dun worry, it's only around five-thousand words) for free (I can offer very little consolation other than my thanks and praise for your awesomness for helping me) and tell me what you thought... but I want you to be brutal. Dissect everything about the story, the characters, the setting, the dialogue, the spelling, the grammar... I want critizism on every itty-bitty detail you can find, and all suggestions are valid as long as they help to improve the story in some way, shape or form! So please, help a guy out who'd really like to get his writing career off to a good start! Please E-mail me at [email protected] if you are interested in recieving a beta version of the story... if you have any questions pertaining to this request, please PM me here before sending an E-mail. Thank you in advance, my friends!