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neighbor-s-sister

Please see this:

http://i866.photobucket.com/albums/a...6_6/1111-1.jpg

This is the story actually...
I thought it could be a one single picture....
But this site do not accept *very tall* picture...

I tried to cut it, but it always says *to tall*....




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Well....
I have no idea if this story is acceptable for this contest.
If not, please delete it, and i can post it into my gallery.

This story is basically happened in the summer....
However, after I finished this, I think the core of this story is not spanking after all....
Ok, I even don't if this tiny story really have a main idea or not....

I did this without plan, is kind of play by ear...

This time I didn't put any dialogue in the story.
I hope you can understand.


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FIREBALL666



IchiGo IchiE

Registered: April 2008
Posts: 328
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Date: Fri June 18, 2010
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Keywords: neighborssister



Peeker
Because Words Matter
Wow.

I am sorry, Fireball, but I do not have good words to appreciate this with.

I hope you are very proud of it. It made me smile.
#1 Fri June 18, 2010 04:55

Mushy
Artist
The size works really well - I'm able to see everything and it's really pretty. I'm not sure of all that goes on, but I understand most of it and thought it was really cute. All the spankings were adorable, but not just those, everything in-between. I've always appreciated that you don't rush to the spanking. You give story and other stuff as well.

As for the file size, did you go to "more options" on photobucket, under the large green "Upload Images and VIdeos" button and select "1 megabyte file size"? That usually prevents it from asking me to crop my images or automatically resizing them, but I'm not sure what the limit is on that - this still may be too tall, and you may have already done that.

Anyway, you did a really lovely job, and I feel like saying that again. ESPECIALLY because you did it without a plan - that's just...really incredible.
#2 Fri June 18, 2010 05:01

razzy234
Senior Member
that was a very good story. i liked it a lot. i really like your drawings. they're quite well done
#3 Fri June 18, 2010 05:22

BlueSleeper
Member
Very cute. I wonder if it could be broken into individual images, and posted that way?
#4 Fri June 18, 2010 05:53

Bleachdoll17
Gold Member
Extremely cute I love all the little scenarios. The one with watermelon was adorable. Shows how often little kids mess up carefree and do it again after xD.

Be proud of this work
#5 Fri June 18, 2010 06:55

Cc
Artist
This is a little small to see but it is still very cute. I really think this is amazingly well drawn and so adorable. Probably the cleanest stuff I've ever seen you draw, considering it does look hand drawn instead of digitally. Really nice to see it, I always wondered how your pencils looked. I think I get a good sense of the story even without dialogue. Really great entry. I would say it is appropriate. Thanks so much for taking the time to enter it!
#6 Fri June 18, 2010 07:04

Tienz
Mr. Random
Gorgeous. It's so clean for pencil work.

Did it ever have dialogue? It looks perfect without any.

Particularly like the middle part right after the vase got broken. Thought that was an especially cute segment.
#7 Fri June 18, 2010 07:35

zeraga
Junior Member
Well done. It was well drawn enough to be understandable even without dialogue. Sort of like watching a silent film...

It felt good to just enjoy the story as it is and the spanking scenes was definitely a nice bonus (and very cute)
#8 Fri June 18, 2010 13:00

_cf
Blue Moon
The story is lovely. Any chance of you cutting it into pages and uploading them? This way, you don't have to reduce it so much.
#9 Fri June 18, 2010 13:03

ysfeternal
Member
It is a very good story to show the interactions between sisters/girls. The drawings are warm and curing,
and the characters in this story are so cute~~! I wish i could have sisters like that! Good Job! FIREBALL666 san.

I think that all spanking scenes are highlights in the whole story, not only the good composition and cute expressions but also the turning points make sisters become more intimate~.

p.s: In the scene broke the vase
I wonder if there is possible to show us how the "Older/Oneesan" being punished? the spanking scenes are all to younger sister, i think that put in some older's scenes would make it more balanced.
#10 Fri June 18, 2010 15:29

The Freudian Slip
Ultimate Alchemist
Splendid. Absolutely splendid. The things others wrote about how they felt about your story are quite similar to my own feelings. I loved it, and it gives meaning to the saying "an image is worth a thousand words" - you do not need dialogue to convey a story to people.

With that said, a good way to share with us the full-sized picture would be to either separate it in several pieces and submit it, or there is a trustworthy website called dropbox (www.dropbox.com) where you simply create an account, then download it on your computer and you can share things with people either by creating your own folder in your dropbox folder (wherever you choose to install it into your computer) or simply copy and pasting files into the "public" folder of your dropbox folder.

Still, the one you posted on photobucket was quite good, as it allowed others to see properly the feelings you were trying to convey through it, despite it not being full-size.

Man, I write a lot.
#11 Fri June 18, 2010 21:01

RobM
~Sweet British Cyanide~
The too big error is because its a mile long, obviously. Its too big even for the site to accept (later generating a thumbnail).
The spanking meme pics are quite big and they post fine so this must be really large!

An even BETTER way would be to turn it into an animated GIF and post here, of course thats a matter of taste.
Fireball: Given you have a folder full of multi-part page comics, can't you seperate it into individual pictures and post?
#12 Fri June 18, 2010 21:42

Gure-sensei
Your Maid Kitten
Adroable ;w;
I think is very good show of bond and culture!
#13 Sat June 19, 2010 18:44

SP Anka
Artist
Really cute drawings! More plz! ;-)
#14 Sun June 20, 2010 10:44

Zekel
Artist
It's an extremely cute and heart-warming story - as expected from you. Very summery with the fireworks and all. No dialogue works very well, I think. It's not too small to read either, but of course, it would be great to see it bigger, to fully appreciate all the detail.

Having the whole thing here would have it's benefits, but if cutting it in parts is not an option, you could try uploading to Mediafire.com, for instance (it doesn't need registration), and posting the link here. Maybe zip it first, if it gives an error. I don't like the animated gif idea, because it takes away one fundamental aspect of comics - the reader's ability to move between panels freely.
#15 Tue June 22, 2010 14:29

Ironfang7
VIP Donator
I love how expressive your drawings are. They are easy to understand without words just by the emotions and feelings within them. I loved the story too, I was heart warming.
#16 Sun April 21, 2013 04:57

Mocarn
Probationary User
Why is the picture on my side so blurry
#17 Fri April 9, 2021 17:14


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