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over-the-desk

Long time lurker, first submission. I know there is still a lot to be improved and it's a very basic drawing.

Comments and criticism welcome.

(also, I don't have a scanner right now, so it's from a camera pic :-s)

flashmaster63

Senior Member

Registered: July 2007
Location: Alberta, Canada
Posts: 647

Date: Mon June 20, 2011
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Tags: 1
Filesize: 178.6kb
Dimensions: 1152 x 864
Keywords: naked desk

Peeker
Because Words Matter

Welcome and congrats on posting! ^_^

I like your body proportions. See if you can get some un-ruled paper, though, it'll improve your picture quality. Look forward to seeing more!

#1 Mon June 20, 2011 04:38

forks
Artist

I'm surprised you did this with a camera - most people's camera shots come out looking pretty poor.

I have a soft spot for lined paper, actually. I like the way it looks.

Proportions are good, although I think the legs are a bit short. Also, could use a little bit more booty if you know what I mean.

Needs perspective.

I feel like I've seen your name around before. Have you fav'd/commented my art maybe?

In any case, welcome and happy drawing!

#2 Mon June 20, 2011 05:24

jalocin1234
The Yellow Imp

wellcome to Aotk man

i agree with both Peeker, and Iloveforks^_^

#3 Mon June 20, 2011 10:34

redbottomboy884
Member

Your proportions are wonderful. You're off to a great start, if this is in fact your start. I can't offer any criticism, really. Just keep drawing, please!

#4 Tue June 21, 2011 06:15

flashmaster63
Senior Member

Thanks for all the comments, I appreciate the tips!

#5 Wed June 22, 2011 04:49

redbtmfun
VIP Donator

I think it is a fabulous first submission! Great job.

#6 Thu June 23, 2011 00:53

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