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FIREBALL666



IchiGo IchiE

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Date: Tue November 1, 2011
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revya
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oh my he lost his head
#1 Tue November 1, 2011 04:24

Madcat
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Wannabe Elders are often killed by their superiors as often as they are killed by the next wannabe-Elder in line. You would think they would take a hint. After all, "The wise man learns from the deaths of others."

Suggested edits and corrections (keep getting distracted by awesome art and cute vampire girls)

Top in-box: "After the spanking, I think I hypnotized myself. I will keep enjoying this role of being a child and being taught. But... someone with no sense of sentiment will always spoil this moment..." A few spelling and punctuation corrections, and a slight edit for space-saving as well as more fitting the speech pattern of an ancient vampire, I think. You can keep "mess up" instead of "spoil" though.

She says: "Ivan?! Why did you come here!? Did I not say I needed a break?" Spelling corrections.

Ivan says: "Your Majesty, the Elder, Soloman, needs to speak with you. Also, I think we can serve you much better, if you let your mortal desires be known." Spelling fixes and rearranged the order of some words to make it sound more like a prim-and-proper Ventrue and not some random Anarch. This could also be written as, "Your Majesty, the Elder, Soloman, needs to talk to you. Also... I think if you let us know your mortal desires, we could serve you better." Which is closer to what you have printed now, and means the same thing.
#2 Tue November 1, 2011 06:33

Mina
Demonic princess
HEADSHOT !
#3 Tue November 1, 2011 09:02

Jinchu
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She's absolutely adorable on the top panel...
Also - that's what you get for disturbing mighty elders! ^__^
#4 Tue November 1, 2011 13:53

Atomsk
Member
Dammit! Mina got it before me.... Oh well, BOOM HEADSHOT!
#5 Wed November 2, 2011 00:10


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