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A very nice story with very expressive art, as usual with your comics. The desire of the "girl" to briefly forget about her powers and nature is quite touching.
Very nicely done indeed fireball. I would have gladly treated that vampire like a human adolescent without the need of hypnotism if she so desired. XP A very nice Halloween short story. However I can't wait for the continuation of your other story.
Heh, I like how she threatens him with Final Death by Burning after just giving him Final Death by Decapitation. I like her style! Pity about her dress, though...
Like Takashi said, no hypnotism needed on me, either. If she wanted me around forever? I don't mind being a Ghoul... I'd spank her as often as she needed me to.
Suggested edits and fixes and stuff:
She says, "Kids these days, they have no manners." Means almost exactly what you printed, but fits the common English phrasing better.
Center-left in-box: "Ah... I got so annoyed, we didn't even finish the script."
She says: "Honestly... I have not been happy like this for a long time. Thank you for your lesson, father. I love you, and, good night..." Just some grammar and spelling fixes.
Man, I cannot *wait* for your next piece, whether it's a single page, a new comic, whatever. I have really, really enjoyed all of the comics you've posted to AOTK.
A superb and excellent story. Gorgeous spanking scenes and lead-up as always! A great and total personality departure from the last heroine, also. As always, the protagonist is very lovely and complex. A wonderfully eerie and well-structured masterpiece.
So, let me understand this: The WoD references came from a friend of yours who filled in details of "western" vampires? In any case, Madcat's comment from page 03 bears repeating: Best. Use. Of Dominate. Ever.
Regarding the art, it's outstanding. I'm glad to see your art again.
that was great. well and truly. A good story. ( Personally i like a storyline with a dark streak. wich this is a perfect example of ) GREAT artwork as per your usuall. you make me so envious at times. And the translation was good enough to understand what was going on.
Madcat ,thank you very much for all the edits and fixes, and the rewrite!
I will edit this again later, and post it onto downloads.
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Haha, you are right. I just have the most basic idea about the vampires. Maybe everything I know is come from the Type-Moon setting. However, their vampire setting is hard for others to do some "self-design", so I asked my friend about the WOD world. (He know a lot of TRPG stuff, I sometimes play D&D with him.)
But not that much, Just the clans, some titles and terms. I didn't do any serious reading about this, so sorry for the casualness. For example, I didn't even know that a decapitation can give a vampire final death..haha.
Great story. I like the dark ending, and how quickly she reasserts herself. There is a hint of madness, and a touch of horror, while the story is about the obsession with spanking. I don't think the WoD setting is necessary, but otherwise it's great. Thank you for sharing! By the way do you upload the originals anywhere? (the non english version)
Wonderful. And the artwork was very enjoyable. I love her character, I could really feel her emotions and strength. Would love to see more stories about her.
I don't know anything about the setting, but I quite like the scenario. You sure have a knack for drawing girls cute and sexy at the same time, Your usual, sketchier work is great, but seeing a more polished story like this is a real treat.
Wow just wow. Fireball the stories you craft for this site are amazing. You always manage something unique that we can all get absorbed in. Even without the stories your art by itself is fantastic!
Look forward to seeing more cute girls with more cute/sexy bottoms from you.
im going to go out on a limb here and say that the man she chose to spank her unfortunate is no longer among the living due the fact she most likely had no choice but to silence him.... in all honesty this here is one of my favorites due top the amount passion you placed into it and i think the most intertesting part was that even though you were writring piece that was meant to excite the reader you still managed to draw the reader evgen further into the storys world with ease due to how informative you made it with each page i turned i felt more and more interested in not only the incident but the setting and the characters i also breathed a sigh of reliefe to see that the character in question quickly was able to show her dominance within the blink of an eye and her composure as a characyter was not sullied by embarassment at being found out she acted just as i expected to be honest i will hoever point out that i do wish that it coulsd have continued but alas i can also understand as to why you didnt continue it as to be honest there isnt much more you can do with it
to you too 
