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All right. The end.
Hope you guys can get what I am saying.

Madcat ,thank you very much for all the edits and fixes, and the rewrite!
I will edit this again later, and post it onto downloads.




Well..

\ OWO /
Happy Halloween!!!


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FIREBALL666



IchiGo IchiE

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Date: Tue November 1, 2011
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revya
Senior Member
happy halloween to you too
cool story
#1 Tue November 1, 2011 04:35

Erebus
Senior Member
A very nice story with very expressive art, as usual with your comics. The desire of the "girl" to briefly forget about her powers and nature is quite touching.

Many thanks !
#2 Tue November 1, 2011 05:03

JD500
Banned
What a marvelous way to end halloween, a chapped vampire bottom, and a bloodthirsty vampire! :P
#3 Tue November 1, 2011 05:12

Komuro
#1 Onii-chan
Very nicely done indeed fireball. I would have gladly treated that vampire like a human adolescent without the need of hypnotism if she so desired. XP A very nice Halloween short story. However I can't wait for the continuation of your other story.
#4 Tue November 1, 2011 05:36

Madcat
VIP Donator
Heh, I like how she threatens him with Final Death by Burning after just giving him Final Death by Decapitation. I like her style! Pity about her dress, though...

Like Takashi said, no hypnotism needed on me, either. If she wanted me around forever? I don't mind being a Ghoul... I'd spank her as often as she needed me to.

Suggested edits and fixes and stuff:

She says, "Kids these days, they have no manners." Means almost exactly what you printed, but fits the common English phrasing better.

Center-left in-box: "Ah... I got so annoyed, we didn't even finish the script."

She says: "Honestly... I have not been happy like this for a long time. Thank you for your lesson, father. I love you, and, good night..." Just some grammar and spelling fixes.

Man, I cannot *wait* for your next piece, whether it's a single page, a new comic, whatever. I have really, really enjoyed all of the comics you've posted to AOTK.
#5 Tue November 1, 2011 06:39

Zangoose
Gold Member
Is called Dominate a Discipline from the clan she is, Ventrues the leaders of the most powerful vampire alliance The camarilla
#6 Tue November 1, 2011 06:42

Chnmmr
VIP Donator
A vampire the masquerade spanking.... who'd have thought I'd see one of those lol.

Love the art but not a fan of the story, then again I'm not a fan of vampires in general. Ah well, still really well done
#7 Tue November 1, 2011 06:46

Pastel
Moé Princess
Wow, completely above and beyond, fireball!
#8 Tue November 1, 2011 09:36

Cross-chan
Pervert Persona
A superb and excellent story. Gorgeous spanking scenes and lead-up as always! A great and total personality departure from the last heroine, also. As always, the protagonist is very lovely and complex. A wonderfully eerie and well-structured masterpiece.
#9 Tue November 1, 2011 10:47

_cf
Blue Moon
So, let me understand this: The WoD references came from a friend of yours who filled in details of "western" vampires? In any case, Madcat's comment from page 03 bears repeating: Best. Use. Of Dominate. Ever.

Regarding the art, it's outstanding. I'm glad to see your art again.
#10 Tue November 1, 2011 11:32

worldpeaceful
Senior Member
i will be honest it was how should i put it ...

arousingly good ...

as always i love seeing your artwork,

but to be honest i dont know if i like the story line much....
#11 Tue November 1, 2011 11:47

Aprion
Silent Runner
that was great. well and truly. A good story. ( Personally i like a storyline with a dark streak. wich this is a perfect example of ) GREAT artwork as per your usuall. you make me so envious at times. And the translation was good enough to understand what was going on.

In summary, incredible work.
#13 Tue November 1, 2011 12:24

Jinchu
VIP Donator
Excellent art. Truely artistic level.
And great plot.
And... Spanking WOD-based story. That really made me happy.
Thank you, thanks a lot. *__*
#14 Tue November 1, 2011 13:59

Nadja
Spanktastic
*Builds a sacrificial altar to worship Fireball*
Oh my god dude, I love you! And I really hope we get to see more of lil miss vamp!
#15 Tue November 1, 2011 14:57

FIREBALL666
IchiGo IchiE
Madcat ,thank you very much for all the edits and fixes, and the rewrite!
I will edit this again later, and post it onto downloads.

>_cf

Haha, you are right. I just have the most basic idea about the vampires. Maybe everything I know is come from the Type-Moon setting. However, their vampire setting is hard for others to do some "self-design", so I asked my friend about the WOD world. (He know a lot of TRPG stuff, I sometimes play D&D with him.)

But not that much, Just the clans, some titles and terms. I didn't do any serious reading about this, so sorry for the casualness. For example, I didn't even know that a decapitation can give a vampire final death..haha.
#16 Tue November 1, 2011 16:54

roddy
VIP Donator
What can I say that others have not? Brilliant as usual
#17 Tue November 1, 2011 21:54

mushishi
Artist
Great story. I like the dark ending, and how quickly she reasserts herself. There is a hint of madness, and a touch of horror, while the story is about the obsession with spanking. I don't think the WoD setting is necessary, but otherwise it's great. Thank you for sharing! By the way do you upload the originals anywhere? (the non english version)
#18 Wed November 2, 2011 20:33

Vicious
Senior Member
GREEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAT!
#19 Wed November 2, 2011 21:55

Kira_Wolf_Cub
The Only Danish Wolf
Nice. Great Halloween story and beautiful artwork.
#20 Thu November 3, 2011 00:16

redbtmfun
VIP Donator
Wonderful. And the artwork was very enjoyable. I love her character, I could really feel her emotions and strength. Would love to see more stories about her.
#21 Thu November 3, 2011 01:28

Dragons
Gold Member
Great story! I loved it!
#22 Thu November 3, 2011 02:20

NoiselessKnife
Roleplayer
one of the mos amazing, inspiring and cool comics I've ever read. Congratulations.
#23 Thu November 3, 2011 05:54

johny741
Senior Member
i give up
does the "father" die or not
oh and metal gear
#24 Sat November 5, 2011 06:38

tackebong
Member
wow! masochistic and scary! i like her
#25 Sat November 5, 2011 12:26

Alicel
Probationary User
*_* wow
#26 Thu November 17, 2011 11:36

Zekel
Artist
You're the best, Fireball!

I don't know anything about the setting, but I quite like the scenario. You sure have a knack for drawing girls cute and sexy at the same time, Your usual, sketchier work is great, but seeing a more polished story like this is a real treat.
#27 Fri November 18, 2011 10:43

Sheamachost
VIP Donator
Wow just wow. Fireball the stories you craft for this site are amazing. You always manage something unique that we can all get absorbed in. Even without the stories your art by itself is fantastic!

Look forward to seeing more cute girls with more cute/sexy bottoms from you.
#28 Tue November 29, 2011 19:03

captfalconpunch
Senior Member
I'd like to see a sequel where she finally meets her match, and gets spanked of course. I'm hoping the poor dad survived to teach her a lesson later.
#29 Wed September 19, 2012 06:45

rainbowdelice
Probationary User
I just LOVE how you draw
#30 Sat September 29, 2012 22:38

worldpeaceful
Senior Member
im going to go out on a limb here and say that the man she chose to spank her unfortunate is no longer among the living due the fact she most likely had no choice but to silence him.... in all honesty this here is one of my favorites due top the amount passion you placed into it and i think the most intertesting part was that even though you were writring piece that was meant to excite the reader you still managed to draw the reader evgen further into the storys world with ease due to how informative you made it with each page i turned i felt more and more interested in not only the incident but the setting and the characters i also breathed a sigh of reliefe to see that the character in question quickly was able to show her dominance within the blink of an eye and her composure as a characyter was not sullied by embarassment at being found out she acted just as i expected to be honest i will hoever point out that i do wish that it coulsd have continued but alas i can also understand as to why you didnt continue it as to be honest there isnt much more you can do with it
#31 Tue April 5, 2016 02:34

worldpeaceful
Senior Member
and nowva geek out moment.... I WANT THIS GIRL !!!! lol sorry about that im done now back to using my brain
#32 Sun June 12, 2016 20:22

texacon48
Junior Member
Loved this, and happy haloween
#33 Tue July 7, 2020 12:11


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