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Commission for Passionate Shadow. As always don't be shy and tell me what you think. Especially if you think something could be better.


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H-bum



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Registered: April 2011
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Date: Fri January 11, 2013
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Keywords: bent hand marks cane bandaid maid crossdress mm tempo ollie julian



Jinchu
VIP Donator
As always, it's pure masterpiece! Words fail me... So I'll just mention how I love Tempo's beautiful legs ib that wonderful stockings. *__*

Well, as for criticism... It's nonsense to criticize the artist of your level, waaaay better then at least 99% people here... But Ollie's facial expression, I think, could be... more expressive. ^^; It's still great, I just think that you can do even better.
#1 Fri January 11, 2013 22:09

H-bum
Artist
Bobby, Jinchu,

Thank you guys!

Well, i'm not asking for in depth technical critiques (although if someone would give one that'd be awesome) Your opinions can point me to things i've never paid enough attention to.
#2 Fri January 11, 2013 22:30

vaikeb
VIP Donator
Amazing. Incredibly amazing!

Since you ask critique, and mind it comes from someone not able to draw acceptable stick figure, where is spanker looking at?
#3 Fri January 11, 2013 23:00

Passionate Shadow
Banned
Oh my gosh. I can even begin to describe how happy this makes me X3
Just all the little details are so amazingly awesome! The textures of the floor, carpet and the plush pillows on the seats as well as the blue on the counters are really nice. The thread like texture on Julian's vest is pretty neat and adds to the effect. I really like the nice background and how off to the left you can see a few things in the jar out of focus. Julian's pose turned out very well I really like what you did with the hips and the shoes are very nice. His tie clip is neatly placed and adds to his professional look. At first I thought he was going to hand gloves on but I can see you went with bare skin which still looks really well. The lighting is also really well done. I'd say the skirt on Tempo is nicely done what with all the lacey details and the garters matching the shoes are really pretty and elegantly made. I like Oliver's legs and Tempo's legs very much- They have a nice shapely appeal to them. I think Oliver looks a little too boyish. His hair doesn't seem to have his usual side swept bangs and I think he doesn't quite look like a mouse. I think by adding slightly larger eyes would help as well as making his tail and hair match color wise- I think pure white suits Oliver better than platinum blonde.. I think by pushing the ears upwards more towards the top of his head and rounding them out to look more 'Mickey mouse' shaped it would achieve a better look and idea of 'mouse'. I think a smaller nose and lighter eyebrows might have also added to make Oliver seem a bit more famine. I like the pose and I loved the tiny details everywhere though. Like the nails underneath their stockings? Beautiful. The marble counter tops? Amazingly gorgeous. The little indents of Oliver's shoes pressing in to the chair? Very, very nice indeed. I keep finding myself gravitating back to the feet and legs. You really do, do a very nice job on them, The blushing tones and such are a very nice touch to such shapely bits.
I like the overall feel of the image. It's extremely classy and shows off a very black tie feel to the Cafe. The lighting is nicely done and shows good interior design 'fashion' knowledge. I'm very happy with the over all turn out of this image ;3
#4 Fri January 11, 2013 23:38

Passionate Shadow
Banned
Plus the band-aid is a very cute touch and makes me giggle seeing Oliver with the after care right by his side X3
#5 Fri January 11, 2013 23:41

BabyRie16
RP-o-holic
This is well done, how much are commissions?
#6 Sat January 12, 2013 00:38

Dave_Mire
Artist
Is this based on an actual location, or did you make it up?
#7 Sat January 12, 2013 06:28

What another wonderful picture! I love the emotion and depth that's going on in this picture!
#8 Sat January 12, 2013 11:44

H-bum
Artist
Vaikeb, he is looking towards Tempo's face, but as his body is turning for a swing his head follows along a bit.

I don't know, he seems right to me now, maybe when i look at it later i'll notice something.
#9 Sat January 12, 2013 15:01

H-bum
Artist
Passionate Shadow,
a few things on Oliver: i tried for the same look as in my previous picture, he looks boyish mostly because of his broad shoulders and heavier arms (compared to Tempo). And if he is to have round plush ears on his temples he has to have real human ears too. A head without ears looks grotesque in semirealistic style.

Thanks for detailed reply by the way!
#10 Sat January 12, 2013 15:09

H-bum
Artist
Dave, not real location, borrowed elements from different bars.

Ciel, i thought you might Enjoy!
#11 Sat January 12, 2013 15:12

Ellen
1st Lobster
The place looks kinda creepy. A bit like the crossbred between a tea bar, a museum and a funeral parlor specialised in urn and cremation.

Your design of Ollie I would not have recognised as Ollie if I had not been told. Tempo is Tempo though.

Technically you did not dissapoint after your several very well done pictures.
Two things I am not sure about that stick out a little are: The little light on the left hand side is the only visible one turned off. Also it caught my eyes how red the reflection on the backside of the teacattles is.
#12 Sat January 12, 2013 18:27

H-bum
Artist
Quote:
The place looks kinda creepy
Is that a good thing or bad?

Quote:
Your design of Ollie I would not have recognised as Ollie if I had not been told
You wouldn't recognise him as Ollie from my previous pic or as Almonds Ollie?

Quote:
Two things I am not sure about that stick out a little are:
Yep that section should recede in darkness, don't want viewer to wander off towards the edge.

Top shelf on the right has small backlights. The design element i liked, but had to play it down a little so it would'n grab too much of attention.
#13 Sat January 12, 2013 20:34

Passionate Shadow
Banned
None the less I love it ~ =w=
#14 Sat January 12, 2013 20:52

Ellen
1st Lobster
A happy customer is more important than my nitpicking for sure.

I would have recognized him as your design of Ollie. Even if his face looks sharper from this perspective and with the shadows.

If creepy is good or bad depends on what feelings you want to invoke with your picture.

The single blank light bulb might draw a viewer to that spot because of pattern recognition, but fading it into darkness is not a bad choice in any way.
#15 Sat January 12, 2013 20:59

naughtypadawan
Naughty Jedi Boy
OMG! I love Ollie comforting Tempo by holding his head. So very cute!! Ollie's tail is adorable, too. Thanks so much for sharing!
#16 Sat June 7, 2014 13:03


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