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Second half. You guys should know what kind of perversions to expect from me by now :P
The implement in the second picture is something called a Bodenlochstab (I need a german speakers opinion of that word btw) that I made up a few days ago. It's just a ruler with a handle, basically.
I don't really hate colouring as much as I used to, but it takes up so much time and I have a real problem keeping my focus on one piece instead of creating a lot of rough sketches.
Anyway, these pictures are an homage to Zani's "Amber Lyn's Bad Day" picture, which is one of my favorites. It inspired the idea and the page layout, as well as the title. Thanks Zani, I hope you're okay with this
Hope you guys like it. As always, feel free to jump in my rarely visited suggestion thread and feed my under archiving imagination.
I have to say, I always did like the diary format of some pictures, and this one makes use of it quite well. I wouldn't complain if there was a follow up. Very nice work.
Yeah, well done with the scene. The story of a whole day's naughtiness being responded to was done well - I love the cross-outs and self-censoring the girl does, it makes the story that much more immersive. I think it might be one of the best ways for your audience to get more absorbed into Emberthorpe, by giving the girls a voice - maybe you'll even be inspired to do more of them! =)
I speak some German, but "Bodenlochstab" doesn't really seem to mean anything... or, rather, it's really badly put together. I think you are looking more for something like hinternlochstab, but mastdarmstab or endarmstab would be more... anatomically appropriate.
According to my trusty (and lethal if thrown with good aim) Langenscheidt, "Bodenlochstab" does not exist. The correct term for arsehole would be "arschloch" althouhg is considered vulgar and more associated with people. "Schnürloch" would the more "correct" form.
As for "stab", while it can technically mean staff or stick, it´s more often related to actual staves, as in, for walking. A more neuter word would be "Stange"
So, you´ll be looking for something more in the lines of "Schnürlochstange". Trying to pronounce things like that is the reason why German is so much fun to us strangers XD
flashmaster63 and Peeker: I enjoy the format as well. I'm not good with speech bubbles, so having some other excuse to formulate a narrative is nice. And yeah, a sequel is probably inevitable.
Egoak: Thanks you just might get your wish
Arukan: I haven't drawn that before. Maybe another time
Madcat, Leonid and Ellen: Thanks for the advice. It's a groove smacker, so the name should mean "bumhole whacker" or something to that effect. I think I just google translated anus-cane and came up with bodenlochstab.
Well, thanks for nothing google translate ;_;
Jinchu: Thanks. I enjoy drawing exotic positions, but it ends up looking really weird sometimes. And yeah, that's Emberthorp alright. I'm really enjoying that setting, to the point where I can't finish projects related to anything else :S
Well anus would just be "Anus" in german and cane would be "Rohrstock".
The groove you mean could be tranlated as "Ritze". A whacker could be something like "Schläger". So "Ritzenschläger" would be something that could work. If you have to have a german word for your madeup thing. But you might as well call it "Groove Whacker" though.
Enjoyed the whole story. Normally I find color makes a pretty massive difference in how much I like the work but not in this case. I really really like the ebil ideas (soap/diaper/plug/lovely shibari/stocks/...) and the story with that. Coloring it is a brandy soaked cherry ontop of a chocolate sunday for me.
you just might get your wish
