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Here's Part 3 of 5!

Sorry for the change in text style, I still don't know which one I like more! >.<;;

I tried starting to make my own pattern/water/grass textures to pop in for detail to make the picture get done quicker. Does it look good? bad? gimme feedback please!!


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Loba.De.La.Luna



Innocently Mischievous

Registered: July 2007
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Date: Thu November 6, 2014
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Keywords: teacher ffm fmf students camping bare bottom public forest



Magelet
Demonic witch
I definately preffer your hand writting . I just love the teacher's expression , no srsly I love it so damn much , it looks so familiar but I can't put my finger on it.
Also really adorable bum that lil girl has :3
#1 Thu November 6, 2014 18:12

CleverFox
Roleplayer
Very, very nice work
And as for the text I think I like your writing better than the ordinary text XD
#2 Thu November 6, 2014 18:54

nelson1977
Artist
Excellent spanking work!^^
#3 Thu November 6, 2014 19:35

Crash-Bash
Spankhappy Megaraptor
3/5, eh? I'm guessing these two have a LOT more coming to them. XD

Ah, don't worry about the grass. It's absolutely fine. ^^
#4 Thu November 6, 2014 20:24

Jinchu
VIP Donator
evrythingh looks good. My only suggestion is to add some grasses around boy's ankles and the sleeping-bag to make it a bit more realistic. Without that grass kinda looks like the flat pattern on the grounf - but not because it is bad by itself.
Very nice scene! I'm waiting for more! ^__^
#5 Thu November 6, 2014 21:12

HandspanKing
Senior Member
that's a pretty butt =D
#6 Thu November 6, 2014 21:12

RobM
~Sweetest Cyanide~
Very lovely~
I see she's swapped for a boyfriend-shirt or somesuch pyjama top for this sorta activity~
Not that I blame her, looks chilly... wouldn't want to expose bare parts except legs to that sort of climate ^^

Great drawing~

To give feedback on the grass, it has been said arleady. I think it ties into the rear tree roots well (although the tree itself seems a little imposed, the way the spankee kid has isn't nestled against it but seems to be an anomalous distance away) but less so the nearside ones. I think it ties into the tent lines just fine.

It's the pocket dimension to the small magellanic cloud the still un-named spanker is sat ontop of that breaks my concentration. Is that... supposed to be a rolled up futon?
If so... yo, dat's well mashed bling-bling pimping tight and shit.

Compare that to the paw-print shirt and rose panties and I'm sensing a break in the pattern, the grass doesn't seem to break into that so well and I might have drawn it (if I was able) with the grass between the spankees splayed fingers. The way he's being hefted over you'd think the weight would be forwards a little - not a lot - and create that effect? The issue seems to be with it interacting with foreground objects. The translation point where it engages with the background and where it interfaces from floor to wall is great.

As a brush, its superb and the mix of green/brown is spot-on for me.

In other news, I thought I wrote someting about your speech-bubbles on a previous comment - I note that this comic has the hand-written ones, previous drawings of yours alter between at least three different ones in the last few months.
Are you trying to find a style you like? For what its worth, I like this one.
#7 Thu November 6, 2014 21:59

Cante
Immortal Commenter
I'm really starting to like these guys XD
#8 Fri November 7, 2014 06:54

Mumrik
Gold Member
Excellent!
#9 Sat November 8, 2014 14:37

Aladdin-kun
Senior Member
3/5 eh? Woot!

Anyway I love how you draw characters and their faces; of course I won't leave out the shapely red-tinged bums we are given =P

Keep up the great work!
#10 Sun November 9, 2014 18:07

Jubal
Gold Member
Amazing !! You are quite talented...that's obvious !!
#11 Sun November 9, 2014 19:20

Bleachdoll17
Gold Member
they deserve that so much.
#12 Sun November 16, 2014 21:13

Jubal
Gold Member
Great stuff, I must say !! Classic over the knee action !! I'm loving it !!
#13 Thu November 27, 2014 00:12


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