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End! My drawing and image editing skills are at an all time low! But I hope you enjoyed this little story anyway :-)


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Lujaine



Artist and Writer

Registered: March 2007
Location: UAE
Posts: 71
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Date: Thu January 19, 2017
Views: 3,191
Tags: 6
Filesize: 86.9kb
Dimensions: 757 x 538
Keywords: ff maid mistress paddle humiliation



remo1
Gold Member
Your drawing skills aren't the best (but mine are NON EXISTENT) but you still managed to make all your characters CUTE. Thank you for this story. I'm sure the naughty little wife learned a lesson!
#1 Thu January 19, 2017 22:31

Mina
Demonic princess
I say not bad at all for your whole serie ! And i'm sure that more you'll keep up, more it will look awesome. You already know how to make each characters fitting already ! please keep it up ! ^^
#2 Thu January 19, 2017 22:43

RobM
~Sweetest Cyanide~
A very demanding (off-screen) dearest. I think it might have benefited from having her stood over her wife with arms folded from the point of view that she's being a take-charge woman~
Paddle and cane... this marriage seems to include a woman who knows all about her wife's faults and how to keep her in line lovingly~

I really loved the whole comic, perfect pacing I thought and it hits a nice number of markers on the way. Really love your SD art, the way you draw faces and the way you compose their poses. They are quite static on a page from the framing but I'm certain you'll continue to entertain us~
Bravo, really lovely little comic - I hope that you're able to continue posting for a while!

Technical-wise if definately needs a little work with building the pages up - I wonder if you're limited with your ability to edit your scanned pages, for example combining the scans to reduce this from 15 pages to around 5 but making it three lines per page? Less clicks and less individual frames makes it easier to read but may throw into sharp relief the subtle reuse of drawings.

I know your drawings are very stylised, I personally love it and think you're particularly skilled
#3 Fri January 20, 2017 01:35

ainmeman
Senior Member
Your already starting to get back in main gear. Cx its good to have you back.
#4 Fri January 20, 2017 03:54

Ligeta
Artist
It's so cute
#5 Fri January 20, 2017 05:17

CrimsonKidCK
Gold Member
Well, I certainly enjoyed the story, although I'd venture that a couple more panels could've been devoted to the actual spanking with more dialogue during it, plus maybe a couple fewer devoted to the floor cleaning with the maid intentionally spilling the wine as directed by her mistress.

The "spoiled wife" certainly ended up being quite seriously disciplined and humbled, although I'd have liked to see her mistress standing right behind the red-bottomed woman, a wicked-looking cane at the ready in her hand, closely watching the naughty wife as she works (last panel).

This is a fun, sweet story with a clearcut moral to it... --C.K.
#6 Fri January 20, 2017 06:35

SurfingGecko
Lizardopholus Pervi
Ha! I LOVED this whole story. My favourite bits are when she tells her she will get a scarlet bottom and the final frame of her doing the chores in just an apron - spanked bottom on show! Brilliant!
#7 Fri January 20, 2017 12:34


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