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Hi. I start a new story. I want try to focus more to the reasons to be spanked and the emotions the spanking give you. What is about the spanking that creates pleasure? The pain? The humiliation? The feeling of feeling like children despite their age? the challenge between spanked and spanking? is it always who spanks to win or even who takes them can win the duel?

So i wrote this story, is a little bit long and i choose to try a new style to rapresent it, is drawn in pencil and it is a vertical narrative instead of single pages so i can keep the flow of the story.

The name of the story is "Immatura" that means "Immature". This is the first part "Pre-spanking". I don't know how many parts will be divided it. I'm sure there will be other two part "The spanking" and "The punishment".

But now it's enough to talk, here is the translation. (If there is someone who is fluent in Italian and English and would like to try to translate it correctly, I will be happy to do an editing for the English version.)


TRANSLATION.

Narration:
In the midst of the giant buildings of the city stands a small apartment building with two houses.
The owner is a man in his fifties who lives with his daughter.
A rented woman lives in one of the houses.

A very special woman.

Girl: thank you so much for the hospitality. When my mother told me she had found someone who would host me I couldn't believe it.

Liliana, 26 years old: Mom told me you weren't really friends. Thank you so much for taking me with you despite this.

Greta, 40 years old, unemployed: You're welcome honey! Your mother babysat me when I was little, we have ten years difference. That's why we've never been friends. The last time I saw you, you were just born. I remember that I was worried about you. Your mother has always been a rigid woman. Stay as long as you want and don't hesitate to ask for help if you need.
But tell me a little! Are you excited about your arrival in the big city? it has nothing to do with the boredom of the village!

Liliana: In few words. I graduated last month. I looked for work in the village but there was no way to find one.

Liliana: So I moved here looking for luck but don't hide you from being scared. I've never worked in my life. And the idea of starting away from home frankly scares me

Greta: I think you worry too much about work.

Greta: You know, there are more ways to survive in the big city. Especially for a beautiful girl like you.

Liliana: More way? What do you mean?

Greta: Use your body.

This city is full of wealthy men, so rich they have money to throw away. Men who are never satisfied with sex. They would also give away the mother for a woman who knows how to satisfy them.

money, alcohol, drugs, a place to sleep.

If you know how to play your cards well, you can have everything you want. Just give them some meat

And sometimes you remember that you have to have fun too

Liliana's thoughts: But- but this....

Liliana: But this is prostitution! give away your body in exchange for material goods!
I-I want to get a job right.
What a figure I would do with my family if I started being a whore!
How can you do such a thing without feeling guilty! Considering that there is also the ....

Greata: shhhhh. Listen to me carefully, this is not prostitution. It is about knowing how to exploit one's own weapons at the expense of the most naive. Those who fuck me are idiots who believe they control the world. I just remind him that they are simple humans. Simple idiots who become your slaves for so little. The world is not all pink and flowers! Every person has a weak side that can be used against him.

Greta: But relax! You don't have to have sex to get something from men. Some of them are so simple that a little charm is enough.

Greta: Come! let's go sit on the couch. I'll tell you about my landlord and how I can turn it around without sex.

Greta: You must know that my landlord is a very naive man. Believe any crap you invent. Just make sweet eyes and he agrees to everything. Do you think I haven't paid the rent for two months, I just told him I'm having a bit of a problem at work. And I don't even have a job hahahaha.
What a loser! I sold many valuables from the house and he didn't tell me anything. Poor man, he lives alone with that sloppy daughter. Must feel a woman's desire a lot.
With men so there is no need to have sex. Just take advantage of their stupidity

Voice: These are very interesting news!

Greta: but that!

Maria, 16 years old.

Liliana: But who is that?
Greta: Fuck! The landlord's daughter.

Greta: What the hell are you doing, kid ?! Your father didn't teach you that he doesn't listen to others?!

Maria: Really if you haven't paid the rent for two months then it's my house.
Greta: So did you hear it all? What will you do now? You're going to be a spy?
Maria: It seems obvious to me. On one thing you're right. My father is too good. We can't afford to have a slut like you as a neighbor.
Greta: How dare you?! Then you don't really have an education.
Maria: I don't think you can criticize the education of others.
Greta: I'm 40 years old. I can afford to behave like that with whomever I want.
Maria: Well. Now the party is over.

Greta: Pfff! alright then..

Greta: All that remains for me is to force you to keep your mouth shut with the use of force. Get ready to get a good spanking from a mature lady.....

To be continued!


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oscar
The Oscar
Wow, I really like the twist your doing in your new pages. Both in style and story. Keep the good job.
#1 Wed April 17, 2019 19:18

Non so
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Davvero fantastico
#2 Sun June 21, 2020 22:41


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